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Legend of the Demon King Wong Ye-Qui

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Martial Arts
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What is Legend of the Demon King Wong Ye-Qui

อ่านนิยาย Legend of the Demon King Wong Ye-Qui โดย ผู้เขียน CulturedFox ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Once, in an ancient era a demoness queen and a human male became forbidden lovers and they had a child. A boy with the appearence of a human and the heart of a demon...Wong Ye-Qui hated being bullied,...

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Once, in an ancient era a demoness queen and a human male became forbidden lovers and they had a child. A boy with the appearence of a human and the heart of a demon... Wong Ye-Qui hated being bullied, the problem was that he was simply too weak to fight back. All the children around him were able to cultivate and use Qi but every time he tried cultivating green fire appeared around him and he would never get any stronger. With the inability to cultivate he seeks physical training and comes across an alarming secret. Witness how a Wong Ye-Qui crushes his enemies and becomes the ruler of hell... Woohooo! I made a patreon thingy https://www.patreon.com/scorpionbloodking Pls support me!

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परफेक्ट सीक्रेट लव : द बेड न्यू वाइफ इस अ लिटिल स्वीट

“सी येहान की पसंद कितनी घटिया है? वह मुझे इस तरह भी चाहता है? ”उठने के बाद, उसने शीशे में अपने आप को देखा - भयानक विग, टैटू और दानव जैसा दिखने वाला मेकअप। अगर कोई सामान्य इंसान उसे एक सेकंड से ज़्यादा के लिए देख लेता तो शर्तिया उसकी आँखें जल जाती। अपने पुनर्जन्म से पहले, वह दूसरे आदमी से प्यार करती थी, इसलिए अब वो बस सी येहान से बच निकालना चाहती थी और वो उससे तहे दिल से नफरत करती थी क्योंकि सी येहान ने उसे कैद कर लिया था। अपने पुनर्जन्म के बाद, वह उसे अलग नज़र से देखने लगी, उसे यह लगाने लगा कि शायद उसने उसे बेहतर बनाने के लिए बदल दिया था? अतीत में, वो बहुत उलझी हुई थी। उसने अपने तेजस्वी पति को खो दिया था, एक बदमाश से दुखी हुई था और उसने धोखा खाया था पर सबसे ज़्यादा, उसकी सबसे प्रिय सहेली ने ही उसको गुमराह किया था। अंत में, वह बिलकुल अकेली थी। उसके वर्तमान जीवन में, दुष्ट लोग उसके खिलाफ घाट लगाए हुए हैं और बेसब्री से उसके पतन की प्रतीक्षा कर रहे हैं। माफ करना, लेकिन यह लड़की दुबारा उसी झांसे में आने वाली नहीं है!

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Grammar history

SHAKA ZULU Shaka was born in 1787 from a langeni princes Nandi and a Zulu prince senzangakona. The Zulu people rejected him since he was born out of wedlock and therefore , he was brought up by mthethwa kingdom under dingiswayo. Unfortunately, when shaka's father died in 1816, he was succeeded by shaka's half brother sikujana. Therefore, that annoyed Shaka and he tried by all means to move him out of the throne. Therefore, Shaka went to kill his brother with the help Dingiswayo and he took over the throne in 1816. During shaka's rein, a lot of rules were established, for instance, bare foot fighting. People were not allowed to wear anything on their feet as the way of giving them extra mobilities in wars. Cow Horne formation was also introduced. This was used to encircle an enemy inside the horne so that he can easily be captured. He also introduced assegai as a new weapon. This was used to kill a lot of people within a short period of time. He also abolished circumcision. He considered that the time spent in healing the would, could be waisted for his training. Unfortunately, when shaka's mother died in 1827, his mind became embalanced. He introduced a lot of changes to mourn his mother. People were not allowed to cultivate or plant anyway during the mourning year. Husbands and wives were not allowed to have sexual intercourse with the partner. This was considered as the way of showing respect to his dead mother. Therefore, a lot of people died during that season . Unfortunately, shaka's brothers Dingani and Mlangani , decided way to kill him in order to prevent people from being put to death. Finally, after killing Shaka in 1828, Dingani took over the throne.

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Now that it's been a year I'm honestly quite sad that only 26 chapters has been written. Time flies when you're bored. Anyways I just wanted to say that I spent some money (I totally didn't cry) and bought grammarly premium and some apps along with a bunch of writing utensils which will greatly increase the quality of my work. Although the release rate is still quite low since I have a life to live and homework to burn, I still try and write when I have enough motivation (I've been banned from red bull because I'm in puberty and I can no longer fly) Special thanks to Tam123 And our MHA friend Deku for following me all the way to chapter 26 already. I'm really glad. Now that I'm back in London I just have to finish a quick chess tournament and I will start releasing again. Well, enough of this 140 character+ review and time to start writing!

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Ironically that I am giving my own book a review but I have something important for all to know... I am currently 12 years old. It's 2018. I am in school so I usually only release 2 chapters in each holiday but sometimes I write in math class... As a 12 year old I this is my first time writing a proper book. Each chapter I write should have slightly more words than the last. I accept all comments but no spam. Thank you for reading my book.

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First time bothering to rate a novel on this website, so far the story is great but the only thing that’s bringing it down is the story lacks explanations like what's body tempering pearl, why did he get sealed, why and how he got body tempering materials so easily in a cruel cultivation world, the character accepted it without asking/thinking about why he got sealed and how does he know how to unseal his meridians and idk how to fully explain it but the story needs background info, it only says he is 4 and he gets sealed after his test but nothing about where he came from..... I can add more stuff but I think you get the point. As long as these stuff get added in the story will be perfect. Edit: that was a comment before i saw the stat numbers -_- too unreasonable like I Eat Tomatoes novels except it starts at the beginning of the story, initially i gave it a high rating but lowered it because of this but i still think the story has potential if the author is reasonable with how op the main character is, the stats might be reasonable at the end of the novels but not at the beginning of the story unless the author just uses big numbers but it doesn't equal to that much power, but still if that were the case the numbers are just crazy. One of the main reason i read cultivation novel is because i want to see character progression and adventure. I like the bloodline and transformation idea would be nice if the author makes the transformation actually his main body since there are too many novels out there that use transformation as superficial cultivation technique and at the end human body strength is greater than the transformation version. I am still going to read on and see if things improve or the author can make things work with how things are and change my rating based on that. Overall you just gotta make the power system more meaning full rather than just too op and need more background detail, and hopefully the story doesn't focus on women too much because i often see author use that as an excuse to make a ton of filler chapters. I know author is 13 and you already have a great framework for a very great story but the author still has a lot of learn, and don't take offence but this is my honest opinion after reading 100+ cultivation novel. If you can fix and incorporate everything i said using the same idea that you already have then this will be in my top 5 novel list. You also have to know that after reading all these novels now days most novel feel too repetitive to me and the only reason i am writing this comment is because this doesn't. So i hope you improve your story and before all this i hope the story doesn't get dropped which usually tend to happen. I think your story has similarities with 'Warlock of the Magus World' so might want to check that out and 'Swallowed Star'. Swallowed Star author also tends to use big numbers like you so by the time you finish his novel you will be annoyed to look at numbers, they loose their value... and he also tends to ruin the story at the end in all of his novel by getting rid of their uniqueness like bloodlines/special power and stuff.

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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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