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Krea and Zi Adventures

นักเขียน: Nisha903
Fantasy Romance
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What is Krea and Zi Adventures

อ่านนิยาย Krea and Zi Adventures โดย ผู้เขียน Nisha903 ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Krea and Zi Adventures is a series in a tale that is filled with the whims of mystical beings. It is set in the town of Calicrow that at first, seemed bland to Zi. She hangs out with her best friend K...

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Krea and Zi Adventures is a series in a tale that is filled with the whims of mystical beings. It is set in the town of Calicrow that at first, seemed bland to Zi. She hangs out with her best friend Krea, who is now realizing she is a mystical as well. Zi is a Velcro being, with parents that help protect the world from creatures that act up. Der is Zi older brother, and he is training the girls to hone their magical powers so that they can defend themselves from the attacks of others. They all went through drama and scary incidents. They have solved mysteries. This adventure is fast paced with action and funny moments that will be cherished forever!

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The Campus Heartbreakers

Andi is a feminist and environment leader. As young as 17, she promised not to fall in love since men only bring tears and pain to a woman and she thinks women don’t need men. Plus, men cause too much heartbreak that if you multiply all the wasted tissues, it accounts to million if not billion of trees around the world. When she became the Student Council President, one rule is for every ended relationship, both parties must plant 20 trees in total, or they wouldn’t be able to finish their clearance for that semester. Brilliant, isn’t she? She only date guys for the sole purpose of having fun. When things get serious, she leaves them, and repeat. In that case, no heartbreak, no planting of trees. ----- As cliché it may sound, Zach was caught at love at first sight when he saw the most beautiful girl driving in her red sportscar and eating a sandwich on one hand. He so wanted to lick off that mayo and mustard from the corner of her lips. And when she licked the dressing from her finger, that made him hard. He vowed to capture her heart but learned that she hates men. He did everything just to get her attention, however, only misfortune happen between them and the relationship they only have is being enemies. He was so attracted to her, that he dated all the girls in the campus and break their hearts just to pissed off Andi. He did not just defy her rule of planting trees, but he caused too much environmental degradation for those girls he made cry. Will Andi be able to teach Zach a lesson, or she would surrender to his charms? Will Zach give up, or will he pursue the crazy girl that made his heart flutter? Follow the story of Andi and Zach and their campus life.

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Well the novel can work, but there are several things that I would work on. At the reading level there are certain parts in which when reading you feel like you are stumbling, a little editing to make it a little more fluid and organized. Perhaps a hook or something impressive in a first chapter or a prologue if you don't want to modify it will help captivate the reader and motivate him. The use of the first person is very good, but don't forget that if you don't put the character's mentality or something more descriptive in context it can end up seeming a little flat. Keep up the good work and I'm sure the novel will work.

IKECARODEV
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My favorite part of the work is the aesthetic. The second thing would be the leads and my third favorite is the setting. Definitely give this a go.

Chaos_Butterfly
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It is like being thrown in a battlefield without an armor and a weapon. The introduction has too much unknown info that is not properly introduced. An introduction should need as little information as possible, and have as little information as possible. You can build the world step by step and the readers have that much time to waste considering they are reading webnovels.

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