King of Curses reborn's in MHA (multiverse later)

once again another story where the author completely changes the mc which is the entire reason people(me) joined in the first place....................................

I'm starting this fanfiction, but I don't think about doing chapters every day, I have 2 more in progress. I'll do it if I have the time and my mood. Don't judge too much, I write my chapters without thinking too much, I only use simple words and not incomprehensible stuff. I warn that I use Google Trad so don't comment on Grammar unless it's really a mess. Thank you :)

Was pretty disappointed in your Sukuna. It wasn't even Sukuna. In my opinion it was just an ambitious edgy kid with Sukuna's name, Yuji(Sukuna)'s appearance and cursed energy. Other than that, nothing. So mc gets an F-Tier for being another annoying edge-lord. Other than that the plot is as cliche as it could get.. So F-Tier. The writing quality is a solid peak D-Tier. Lotta mistakes and reading other character's thoughts seemed stupid to me. Guess there was some character development for this edgy kid... C-Tier. S-Tier for the loving mother! 🙆 That's about it. Wasn't very enjoyable. But there's always room for improvement in the future.

Me likey likey what I see so give me......... MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It is a good story, maybe a bit fast paced, which I think is totally fine, but I need... MMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE

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it's good. the multiverse idea is good too. I hope you continue this........................................................................

don't need to worry about bad reviews there will be people who will find it boring but pleases dont drop 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍🙏👍🙏👍🙏👍👍🙏👍🙏👍🙏

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The writing quality is ok without major problems, it is expected of an amateur writer, with time it should improve and make the story more involving. But one mistake that I cannot pass up is that the author mistaken the name of the U.A. I don't know how someone manages to end up writing the pronunciation in Japanese (yuei) instead of the correct name. For God's sake, if you're like U.A. in anime and manga, so it's U.A. and not yuei. Even on the yuei wiki it's in parentheses next to the correct name. Update stability is not very good. Of course, the author released a good number of chapters in a short time, but it was much more random, I would prefer that he had a release schedule of 2 chapters per day instead of releasing 3 in one day, 2 the next day and none next. Story Development is average, it's fast and nothing too special, but still interesting, but nothing that comes close to some of the more elaborate fanfics we see out there. Character Design is where this fnafic fails, the secondary characters' personality is weak (something common in fanfics) what is quite unacceptable is that the mc's personality doesn't look at all like that of a sukuna, it would probably be better if the mc were someone reincarnated with the powers of the sukuna instead of this flawed version of the sukuna. The World Background is also average and expected from a fanfic of this level, good enough for those who watched BNH but not enough for those who only watched jujustu to enjoy the story.

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It's good, but the story is just too fast. especially mc's is too strong. like hey they are not even surprise for the mc's power. but yeah I like op mc, but with a balance of his power. but yeah his the king of curses. but sukuna is really not compatible with the MHA world like hey he killed many humans in his prime. so I think his so not suitable being a hero.

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well this is one of the worst storys on this trash app

Something to be improved on is Sukuna's power. Underscaling him to the point of 20f but only using 30% of his powers makes no sense. But I guess it will cause imbalance of him. Give him a philosophy flaw that can mentally break him. That will make him progress more in the story

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