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in the world of Naruto ... (a few years before?)

Author: Alezero
อะนิเมะ&มังงะ
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Synopsis

naoru juarez otaku university after staying watching the last chapter of naruto shippuden, sleepless leaves his house and by hazards of fate (or a weak god) dies des of crashing with a door, after accepting his destiny comes the god (loose ) and tells him that he can reincarnate him in any world he wants and that's how the story begins ... oh and it is very OP the prota, because they will say why I can hahaahahah (evil laugh) And so it starts ... synopsis We all know the stories narrated in Naruto but that's not what this story is about, tell me you do not feel curious to know who trained the great legends of that world, so discover what is here ... This is a translation but it's my story, I do not know why I used the translator I hope not to offend anyone if it's not translated well

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DaoistEFB
DaoistEFBLv6

Story development is ok, and character design is what's to be expected from a fan-fic, but this writing quality, reminds me of when i just started learning English in school.

6yr

InsertUserNameHere
InsertUserNameHereLv12

I'd be in love with this Fanfic, no actually do love this fanfic, it's just the writing is so bad. It's torture trying to figure out what some things say, but yet can't stop reading it, cause I love it. MY BRAIN IS GOING TO EXPLODE!!

6yr
BukanOrang
BukanOrangLv13

Ughh only few words then, IT'S HARD TO READ...................................................................................................................................................................

6yr
Lustsifer
LustsiferLv13

From the synopsis, I know this fanfic will have a really bad grammar that hard to read. I give 3 star each except from writing quality because I am slightly interested in this before reading. And I hope you can improve your English or use Grammarly or hire an editor.

4yr
moxxxie
moxxxieLv5

I go with 1 star. Hard to read man... it sucks i promise... try to study again from grade school... maybe it will help you... good try for writing. Nice thinking but sucks in writing.

5yr
ReviewBrah
ReviewBrahLv11

I am sorry, your story is interesting, but grammar is poor. Try a free version of grammarly or google translate your language to english. I hope u improve instead of not doing anything to it.

6yr
Jackofall
JackofallLv15

The story is pretty good. I dont mean any offence by this but it doesnt look like english is the authors first language, he/she needs to get a editor to edit the grammar. The book is kind of hard to read because it doesnt look like it is written well but the overall story is good, from what i could understand.

6yr
Pervert_In_Net
Pervert_In_NetLv6

ignore the classification, it does not reflect what I really think of the story. the story for me was very good, until chapter 22 where the author decided to send the MC to HOTD! in this story the MC can basically be counted as a ghost of the story. He is immortal and very OP to the naruto world, he has the lineage of uchiha, senju, uzumaki and yuki (Kiri ice user). it grows and with its system it becomes very strong in a short time. as time goes by, the MC becomes a man who roams the world and occasionally interferes with one thing or another, mainly training some characters, like he trained madara, hashirama, tobirama, myth and sarutobi (although he trained sarutobi for just a week) . Mc basically watches the history of the world without interfering too much, it may seem that he is trying to follow the canon, but this is not the case considering that he ensured that the ties between hashirama and madara do not break and they do not fight. during his adolescence he met a girl who fell in love and almost married, but she was killed during a trap they fell into, from there he never fell in love with another woman for almost 100 years, taking into account that he interfered in the fight tsunade, jiraya and orochimaru against hanzo. and then, after saving the three from hanzo, he is sent to the world of HOTD and then goes back to being a horny teenager as soon as he meets Saeko! seriously, it made it look like he didn't live more than 100 years (taking into account his past life). it was such a big break in the mood that I don't even know if I want to continue reading more, it was supposed to be a naruto fanfic, not a multiverse!

4yr
Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

4yr
Hunter_Rodgers_3462
Hunter_Rodgers_3462Lv2

take the dam power stones take them[img=faceslap] \plsssssss plssssss pls pretty pls ***************************************************************8

4yr
cronos9824
cronos9824Lv4

esta es una de las mejores fan fic y no es un lame botas de naruto que tiene que ser de tranpolin para naruto por eso espero que no lo de jencaer y estoy en espera de mas gracias por su trabajo

5yr
ForgottenKing
ForgottenKingLv14

Usually I wont hate on any of the novels I read but I must say this "This fanfic has the worst grammar I have ever seen on webnovel" if u can go back and fix all the grammar it would be a decent fanfic

5yr
joostieh
joostiehLv14

i can't read it . i have tried to read your work auther. but can't seem to stick. so get a editor, and it should be fine after that 140 140 140 140

5yr
Tiktark
TiktarkLv14

I liked it at first, but the grammer was so horrible it was impossible to understand without dissecting the chapter apart, so i gave up on this novel, my advice is to get an editor or someone to clean your current translation so people can actually easily understand the story since it seems good, just bad grammer keeps my rating low.

6yr
joostieh
joostiehLv14

it ain't good. gives a attention to a new female .. tadaa new harem member.. the world is known to us because its naruto universe. al the characters are blend and do not have much life, and they live because they are known to us.

6yr
PandaAreCute
PandaAreCuteLv5

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DaoNotExist
DaoNotExistLv5

meme, so so, what is this?, narutogarden? where kids plays with kunais and some kids gets "accidentally" killed while playing hide and seek tsk tsk what kind of "?????" is this tsk tsk, can you not be more smart?, oh, i see, no wonder, elementary kids these days...

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CZ2128_Delta
CZ2128_DeltaLv6

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Too BAD its been Dropped T_T...................................................................................................................................................................

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