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Immortal beast Ascension

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อ่านนิยาย Immortal beast Ascension โดย ผู้เขียน HeartRend ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.In a small corner of the Tai Peng forest lay a clearing. Within, a small distortion of space deposited a petite form unto the ground.The creature, one not from this world, would aspire to survive and ...

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In a small corner of the Tai Peng forest lay a clearing. Within, a small distortion of space deposited a petite form unto the ground. The creature, one not from this world, would aspire to survive and find the truth about its circumstances. In this world where might makes right, how would the creature survive? Who will it meet on the way? And what is the secret hidden behind its existence? In the face of adversity, he would not surrender. Be it a mountain of bones or rivers of blood, nothing would stop it from protecting those close to it and realizing its goal.

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SECOND CHANCE*

Are you joking now aurora, this is rek my own mate', she said in a confused state, 'He's mine now', aurora replies in defense. This is more of a shocking news, how on earth is aurora now Rek mate was this some kind of joke. Luna turned to Rek in confusion, she needed him to clarify all this. 'I am so sorry Luna, I can't continue lying to myself, you're not worthy to be my mate, I just found my true love,the one my heart beats for and it's aurora, I didn't mean for you to find out this way', Rek said softly. This has to be a mistake, Luna thought now confronting her so called best friend who had just stabbed her at the back a betrayal so full of jealousy. Luna confronted aurora, Luna is now more savage and aggressive her strength increasing more as her anger increases, her eyes now glowing so yellow, black veiny markings appears on her face, her teeth becomes pointed and growing long and sharper her voice becomes deeper mirroring her angry and primitive persona. 'How dare you',Luna says about to attack her best friend aurora but Rek comes in the way 'you are nothing compared to aurora, you're just a court jester and a weakling who's not worthy to be my mate ', Rek added defending aurora She just finds herself denied by her mate, he rejects her. This has brought terrible pain in Luna's heart, she can't live without her mate, it's never possible for a wolf to live without their mate there was nothing left she cried. Luna a strong and powerful she-wolf Princess was now rejected by her mate this is a terrible moment. A terrible pain which is now in her chest a painful agony and she can never live the same again. Rek never loved her or Could his mother be responsible for all this or her best friend just got jealous, all this thought kept running through Luna's mind as she decides to take her life. The worse moment that can ever happen to a wolf is if her mate dies or gets rejected. This rejection has now threatened to cut her life short. Love really hurts.

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Author's subjective view: Writing quality: 5 stars. I think It's quality writing I have developed over years of study and practice. Gammer should be nearly perfect. Grammar Nazi's might find something if they are picky. Stability: 2 stars. Only two chapters, so I will see where the must takes me. But I know I am very busy with work, school and job-search so I won't be able to write every day, or even every few days. Mostly when I have time and the must strikes. I hope to create a story I enjoy writing so I actually want to come back and write, rather than find it a chore. Development and Design: 4 stars. This is what I hope to do. I want to take it a little slow in how I introduce things so I can flesh out characters, motives and sceneries. I want people to be able to visualize what they are reading rather than just get the point across. When reading myself, I always find the most enjoyment when a novel is immersive and I can picture what I am reading. I aspire to do that as well. Will take advice for improvement World Background 3.5 Stars. Not much done yet, but I hope to flesh it out. However, if I actually flesh it out a lot, I am going to get bored as I know the world I am envisioning is massive, so much so that I rather introduce the parts necessary rather than be too detailed at once. That will bore me, and you. In the end, I am a reader first and author second. But I hope to take criticism for improvement. Just don't bother me with grammatical errors because I believe there are very few and I am not going to bother fixing those for now.

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