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I got reincarnated as a jelly fish

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Re: Evolution Online

On just another normal Monday, a new virtual reality game called "Evolution Online" launched out of nowhere and took the world by storm. People were blown away by the game’s hyper-realistic features and endless adventures. Everyone from small companies to big corporations and governments scrambled to get a foothold on this mysterious video game. But what they didn't know was that this game was actually a tutorial for the upcoming apocalypse that was about to hit the planet! The game was a precursor to the Earth's first evolution, where mana was going to be unleashed into the real world! Liam, a high school student who had faced numerous setbacks in his life, turned to 'Evolution Online' in the hope of changing his fate, but instead, he got trapped in the game's twisted world, and things went from bad to worse. When the apocalypse finally arrived, Liam barely managed to escape, but his situation didn't improve. Along with millions of others, he died a miserable death, unable to fight back and filled with regret. However, Liam's story didn't end there. He found himself inexplicably transported back in time before everything started! Armed with the knowledge of what was to come, Liam was determined to become the strongest and most powerful player, unleashing destruction upon the world that had ruined him before! This time, things were going to be different! ******************* Discord Link for chatting with author and character art https://discord.gg/XS7gWScKn8

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Otakuweeb_love
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Thank you for reading my book. Im not a really good author but i want to get. If you have any idears for my book please write it in my comments of the newest chapter.

Omran_EL_Achkar
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I like the book really much i have an idear for oyu book please use more words per chapter than it will be much better. And dont make so short chapters

justkdding_25
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I like the book really much i have an idear for oyu book please use more words per chapter than it will be much better. And dont make so short chapters

TheSpixa
TheSpixaLv1TheSpixa

Here were some things that I felt like could be improved. There were too many sentences beginning with ‘I’s. It was like you’re reading an essay rather than telling me or narrating to me what was happening. Instead, you should use metaphors, similes, adjectives, descriptive words to show me what was happening. There were some grammar and spelling mistakes but I feel like if you add Grammarly on your desktop or write in Google Docs, it can help you correct that problem. The chapters were too short! It was hard to enjoy because of the length but this problem can be solved if you consider my first suggestion^ Use conversations. I liked that you told me what the MC was saying but rather than saying “I said blablabla.” you should say ”BlaBlaBla!” I exclaimed! Here’s what I liked. -It feels very much like and anime because of the plotline, it ws very much enjoyable and solid -The explanation of the story was well executed. -The gradual exposure of the plot was one of the great highlights of your story, it made it really easy to understand. -The ending line of the third chapter was nice! It added a sense of mystery and suspense and foreshadowed what was to come for the next chapter. -The inclusion of the character’s thoughts and feelings were also very good but if you would consider my first suggestion, it would make it perfect!

Ray_Trev
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I like the book . If you wanna know more than read yourself ......... Freaking awesome .The idea is also unique and writing is simple to understand. Read it once ,you will not regret it.

derpyro_belike
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I like the book please make more chapters . .- . .- . . . .

DaoistHc1X0r
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I relly like the book and your ideas but the first chapter was to short and chapter two was quiete a monotone but i like the book and i will give it a chance

lol_lolol
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I like the book but its to short . . . . .

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