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I Can't Accept The Ending

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อ่านนิยาย I Can't Accept The Ending โดย ผู้เขียน Midnight_Alpha ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Diana, a princess, has a close death encounter. Her parents, the king, and queen were murdered by the Reapers, a group of five anonymous packs of wolf shifters that want to overthrow the Royals. They ...

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Diana, a princess, has a close death encounter. Her parents, the king, and queen were murdered by the Reapers, a group of five anonymous packs of wolf shifters that want to overthrow the Royals. They infiltrated the palace planning on killing all three of them, but instead, the Future Spades, a diverse group of species that protect the Royals, got there in time. Sadly they were ordered to protect the heir of the kingdom. The only thing that Diana didn't plan on doing in her ruling was to start a war. She is the Royal Violet Dragon, so she has to rule the kingdom but couldn't, for she had to stay hidden. The Reapers take over the country, putting it in chaos. Diana prepares for war even though they thought she was dead. What will happen? How does she hide? The only way she can survive is to stay in hiding until she is ready. Will she remain in hiding even though her people are suffering, or will she risk her life to save those she loves? * * * * ~This is my first time making a story on Webnovel. But I'm very excited about making this. I'm not very good at describing the story, but if you give it a chance, you may like it. I'm not taking this too seriously, and this is just helping me relieve stress. I also would love it if the readers would comment CONSTRUCTIVE criticism or tips on how to improve. If you like the story you could always support it too..~ * * * *

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Dungeon of Niflheim

In the grand world of Nova, many different races exist such as elves, humans, dwarves and beastmen and through years of war, strife and competition the world has grown, becoming home to great empires and countries throughout the oceans and five continents. However, to the great creators the world has become stagnant and boring, ever since the calamity that was the Church of Light and their Holy White empire. Now the Dark God has created a new race after years upon years of dedicated effort. A species that is like none other and his hope for Nova’s future….Dungeon cores, beings that have the ability to reshape the very world itself, entering the domain of the gods. Join Frost a newly born first generation Dungeon core as he embarks upon his journey within Nova and carves out his place in the world. How will the world’s current denizens react to his birth? Will they be friends or foes? And most of all how the Light God react to this new addition to the world, will he accept them or seek to destroy them? This novel incorporates dungeon building and management but most of that won't fully take off until the later volumes when Frost has much more floors and money to play around with. This is not a solely dungeon story as the MC Frost will have to explore and interact with the world of Nova much like how an adventurer would and forewarning the story is slow. There's a lot of details and avenues which the story goes into, not simply battles, wars and action, it follows all aspects of Frost's life, his growth and interactions with Nova not only as a Dungeon core but also as a person.

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Okay the in between explanations gave me chuckle for a moment, but I won't hold back when I'm giving a constructive criticism. Lets talk about the positive first, the writing quality is quite good, its descriptive and very showy. I kind of enjoyed reading it, the plot of people transforming is kinda interesting, though with only few chapters we don't know much on how the story will continue. Now lets move to with the flaws The first noticeable part that I wanna point out is the in between explanation between scenes, it breaks the immerson, the author should just tell it in a way that would fit in with the whole writing. And also, there is barely any info dumping given in the story, its nice to just "show" in a novel but it lacks the "telling" aspect. Where is this happening? Is this in modern or medieval england? Which part of the globe or time line this was happening. Why was she being chased? What happened to her kingdom? She should know this stuff since she wasn't an amnesiac and we are supposed to put ourselves in her shoes so I think this part deserves an explanation I imagined it was medieval since she was a princess, but then she was delivered in a hospital with a modern tech, so I'm gonna assume its in the modern era. And let's say it was in the modern era, how does these monarchy work? Monarchy in the modern era is pretty rare, or they do exist but just a form of design by tradition and they do not function independently. So I think it was a poor choice to put it in a modern era setting. In terms of the story, I find it questionable why she didn't transform when Balto was looking for her, she should have done it since she almost died. And coincidentally ghost appeared which saved her on the right time. Not much is known with him, but he treated her like a princess and not much is known about his motivation, so I think Ghost is more of a plot device to push the story than a real character. Regardless, was enjoyable read, I know you wrote it as a form to enjoy yourself and weren't serious about it. But since you asked for a criticism, I think I just gave you my honest opinion. Though these are just my opinion, they do not reflect an absolute objective judgement on your writing. Peace. :)

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