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I'm a Wish-Granting Dragon in Dragon Ball (old)

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What is I'm a Wish-Granting Dragon in Dragon Ball (old)

อ่านนิยาย I'm a Wish-Granting Dragon in Dragon Ball (old) โดย ผู้เขียน EmeraldDog ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.This is an older version of a remake which I am now working on so please check that one out instead....

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This is an older version of a remake which I am now working on so please check that one out instead.

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The Black Halo

Hikori Kinusetsu is an average teenager. He thought his life couldn't get any messier. But he was wrong. Lost his mother at the age of seven and left by his father at the age of five. Him and his three brothers were adopted by a couple from another country. At first everything was fine. Until the woman was left by her husband. The woman started to act violent and abusive towards the brothers. This treatment lasted for six years. On Hikori's thirteenth birthday, something horrible happened. As he was getting scolded by the woman for being late, the apartment suddenly blew up. Causing the death of his brothers and other people living in the apartment. He was later found by a secret government called The Shinki. He found out that it's the same organization his father, whom he despises, works in. Having no other choice and having been declared dead to the public, Hikori enlisted. Through his journey with The Shinki, he realizes that the world is bigger than what mere humans know. What caused the explosion on his apartment wasn't ordinary. He was told it was caused by strange creatures called Drakai. Deformed, humanoid monsters who travel in packs and eat humans. As years go by, he saw stuff that was considered unreal. Powers, Monsters, And unknown beings. He vowed to himself, that he'll get stronger to protect those he care for. Burdened by his guilt, he'll even face God himself. A light that is darkened. A sun that's eclipsed. But despite that, hope still comes through. Hikori, is the Black Halo.

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AwokenShawn
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Interesting concept go on Gf dc Chofcbccvvcffggggfcddffffdddgggcdfhvddfffdfcfdgfdfccfcdfcdccffgffccccccccccccccfffc

UndeadBeing
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I'm gonna be straight up with all of you, If you were looking for a wish-granting dragon you're in the wrong place, If you're looking for him being a good story with a dragon that can do anything you're in the wrong place, this is a dragon ball fic with a knock of shenron afraid of heights while being an egotistical emo dragon going on about "Why should I grant your wish? what's in it for me?" type of novel. The title is all wrong and with the stability of updates we probably won't see a wish being granted for about a year and a half at least. So let's go over what I said shall we? We don't see a wish granting dragon, we see a snake that can't go over 10 feet of the ground who thinks wishes are precious, he's told bulma to take him across the world to "See what's so great about the world" Which is an excuse to have a long fanfic. No wish granting, no shenron, lots of egotistical bull-, and an adventure novel about a snake and a girl going across the world so she can get her wish. Don't read this is you want to see the title which is "I'm a wish granting dragon in dragon ball" It should be titled, "In dragonball as bulma's pet snake" ps: I copied what I said and saved it and also took a screenshot of it being posted so tough luck if you try to take it down.

WarTheHorseman
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I've been waiting for someone to do this...This is awesome...wait isn't he bound to kami? well keep up the good work author :)..............

Anoton
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So, Author, I gotta say....this is a work in progress. To put it nicely. To be reincarnated as The Eternal dragon is a great idea! And I'm sure can be further developed, however, the course you took is very hard to read. I admit I'm writing this review without finishing the current 5 chapters. I stopped around halfway into chapter 2. But here are my thoughts on it. 1)You didn't delve into the MC's character, I don't know if he watched Dragonball or not. And if he did, he seemed like he got brain f*ked. Yet, without much explanation, he somehow knows what he is, knows certain characters, yet narrates them like he just met them. 4th wall-breaking "bandit named Yamcha but he doesn't seem important". Then he starts following Bulma to see if her wish is worth it? 2) no real character development. I understand there are only 5 chapters so far but...Why does he submit to Bulma like it's normal? Yes, there is the argument that Earth 'food' tamed even a God of destruction! But why...does he then get treated like an unwanted family visitor your parents invited? that sleeps on the couch? and Bulma starts taking advantage of him. Even calling him a pack dragon? Final Thoughts: If you re-did the book, I can see an OP MC that figures out how to control the power of fate/wish and humanizes himself. Perhaps even getting stronger by eating the other dragon balls. Ultimately wanting to eat the super dragon balls and becoming THE EVER ETERNAL DRAGON. I feel like this is what I originally thought this book would have been about and was thoroughly disappointed. But that's my fault for having the wrong assumption. Don't let this review steer you away from writing! This is one of those things that only with extensive practice will one improve. Keep trying

alesjandritos
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The story has a good potential. Keep up the good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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