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Heaven's Tribulation

นักเขียน: DaoistWenMing
Eastern Fantasy
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What is Heaven's Tribulation

อ่านนิยาย Heaven's Tribulation โดย ผู้เขียน DaoistWenMing ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.When the Heaven Spirits descended, all that bore witness thought of it as a blessing. Only those that survived knew that it was a curse, shackles in place to monitor all beings within Heaven's Code, l...

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When the Heaven Spirits descended, all that bore witness thought of it as a blessing. Only those that survived knew that it was a curse, shackles in place to monitor all beings within Heaven's Code, limits imposed to suppress all beings. Sheng Tian, who's talent transcends even that of the Absolute One, desires to break out of the confines of the Heavenly World and establish his own sanctuary. Will he fall facing the Guardians of the world? Will he stay true to his original intentions? Only time will tell. Operation Revision is underway! I will slowly but surely go back to my earlier chapters and revise them, using the experience I gained to patch up the holes. Any chapter that I have revised will be stated at the bottom in author's thoughts. Current progress: Chapters 1-10

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There is no eternal friendship... only eternal benefits. Ashvale Oberius Navarin is the heir to one of the most prestigious noble families, a crime family in the drug business to be exact and a young chemistry professor. All of his students admire him. In their entire life, they have never seen a person more kind, friendly, and innocent than him. He has a special aura to him that makes one instantly smitten or want to protect him. An angel of a person is supposed to be the heir to one of the evilest crime families, it's almost unreal. Soon everything turns topsy-turvy as the entire human population transmigrates into a fantasy world. In this unknown and mysterious world where humans rank the lowest in the species hierarchy, Ashvale must find his place in the new society. A society, that contains peculiar powers that were only thought to exist in fiction such as Magic and a group of beings called Sponsors. With the introduction of these peculiar powers, there is chaos among humans, their entire community has fallen apart with no distinction between the poor, rich, noble, and the middle. Everyone is greedy for the top spot, the peak of the mountain where the air is crisp. In such a reality, Ashvale Oberius Navarin, the noble heir to the house of Navarin was fated to cease existing. However... Ashvale was still alive and that too healthy and even kinder than before. All that knew Ashvale had question marks in their mind. The 25-year-old had completely exceeded their expectations, frankly speaking... It was a miracle. Or.... was it? People believe what they want to believe, not what they hear, not what they see. Can a naive idiot really survive in such a dangerous world? Is Ashvale Oberius Navarin... really the person people believe him to be? Questions... questions...questions. Why would anyone want a dangerous enemy?.. When one can have a caring friend or a harmless fool capable to be the butt of their jokes. In this fantasy world where mythical creatures, elves, and dragons exist...the line between illusion and reality is a tightrope and to cross it... a great leap of faith is needed.

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Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars (Lets be honest, who would give themselves less than 5 stars unless idk) Anyways, here's my analysis of my very first novel; Grammar, punctuation, and use of clever language I would say is my forte. (Please do point out any mistakes if you see then though) I would say the first 60 chapters or so could have been better and used a bit more polishing. However this is my first novel (Please don't kill me) Also, I'm dumb, so leave more reviews cuz I read all of them. (I do wish to improve my writing skills)

DEMON_LORD_0
DEMON_LORD_0Lv3DEMON_LORD_0

the story is really a great hidden gem!!! would like the author to 1. make the chapter titles more expressive 2. put on a good book cover 3. make his writing style more dramatic 4. put on a good and interesting summary all to attract more readers... best wishes for future🙂 seeing potential in the story so dont disappoint (first time writing a review)

EvilCultivator
EvilCultivatorLv11EvilCultivator

i would say the novel has good potential but author stretching the novel and has so many realms and those realms are also complicated and messed and i mainly don't like the old man who is supporting the mc like he is worst draw back of these novel other than slow pacing and complex realms.Also its best if the author have just choosen mortal , immortal and god realm like simply but now there 7 realms where mc becomes strong in the current realm and become a weakest person in the next above realm and the same repitition for seven whole times.

Resistant_Knight
Resistant_KnightLv14Resistant_Knight

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DaoistUbwoll
DaoistUbwollLv4DaoistUbwoll

I really like the novel and I hope you will not drop it like your other novel There is so much nonsense on Webnovel these days so please don't drop your book and go on

Daynightdreamer
DaynightdreamerLv11Daynightdreamer

As a rookie author myself i hope your novel does well and you enjoy writing. All the best on the trails ahead. As a reader, I found the premise of your story to be very intriguing, especially with the heavenly tribulation origins. The world has potential for intrigue and grabbing someone's attention. I appreciate the creativity. As for the con, the conversations between the characters are not organic, making it feel unreal and stiff. Also, the transition between the different scenes seemed a little rushed. In my eyes, your novel has potential as long as you work on the interactions and the pacing. Those are my humble two cents as a reader. All the best!!!

FreezingPoint
FreezingPointLv15FreezingPoint

Great book with great potential Good English grammars, didn't waste my time reading all chaps, waiting for more chapters.

Suheil_Lakhani
Suheil_LakhaniLv4Suheil_Lakhani

Great book but small question. I've just passed ch 50 and it was said before that he could fight six major realms ahead. yet he struggles to kill people who can only fight 6-8 minor levels. how so?

Lord_of_Endless
Lord_of_EndlessLv4Lord_of_Endless

The grammar is perfect.the work epic.and you are legendary dear author

Lucas_Santos_4643
Lucas_Santos_4643Lv1Lucas_Santos_4643

A premissa e incrivel, o desenvolvimento e viciante, so falta a estabilidade das postagem de capitulos. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

Mindless_Immortal
Mindless_ImmortalLv1Mindless_Immortal

Very nice grammar. Seems to be a good read as far as I can tell. Would recommend though I would wait until there are more chapters.

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