Golden Dragon (DC Universe) (Dropped)

So, I'm doing it! The shameless author review! I don't think my fanfiction is the best or will be the best as I'm still figuring things out, but I believe that it will be one of the greatest! I'm a proud disciple of the Harem Sect and will enjoy writing my MC getting with some of the most memorable gals of DC whether they be villains or heroes. So, come down and strap yourself in for the long ride! Thank you for the support so far!

I like the story overall but can the MC stop being a fucking idiot simp you travel to the DC universe with the inheritance of a golden dragon and you ***** and moan for 8 months he clearly know the DC universe is very dangerous and the first thing you do is tell Batman your identity then take a bullet for Harley even though he barely knows how to use his power at all it's just fucking stupid

First real conversation the mc has with batman he tells him he isnt from this world also his personality sucks and he has been in the dc world for awhile but has literally done nothing.

great premise and idea but you're mcs personality is a major turn off and is ruing the story so I won't read this anymore until a major personality overhaul and plus I hate heros.

People give 5 stars to everything without explanation, so don't bother about 3 stars. The stories are interesting but the MC the central axis of it is annoying, irritating, stupid, lazy, stupid, loudmouth, did I say stupid? Because it's stupid. I don't understand the authors' fetish lately of making the MC a complete garbage ... The rest is fine ... I think.

MC is the type of person who; refuses to train, avoids getting power, ignores advice, is retarded. Not to mention this is another typical harem trash fic.

Why I drop this story? Is simple: Ivy hates MC Ivy saw Mc cultivating Ivy have 4 orgasms watching Mc cultivating even she hating him Ivy decide to have *** with the Mc while he cultivates... I need more reasons?

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The start was a little shacky. might just be me not understanding how the main character could wallow away for so long. also not really a fan of those types of stories, read enough of them in spacebattles. the rest however is coming along nicely. could We get a chart of the main characters abilities? Cultivation novels tend to go of the Railes.

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Author did too good of a job writing a normal guy who is extremely unambitious demotivated as the Mc. But it is a bit too realistic and is unreadable for me after all I came to read FANTASY with a powerful MC at least mentally.

I love this novel totally, I'm not a DC fan and this is the first DC fanfic that has trully gotten me hooked up. Let's Go. Writing Quality: Nigh perfect English, the right amount of words in every paragraph, the contexts can be understood perfectly in every escenario. Stability of Updates: I'm going to give this a vote of confidence as the last chapter was 8 days ago, I just hope this won't be dropped because it is awesome and it looks not too far from reaching a conclusion. Story Development: You feel the story is moving forward, there is a finish line on sight unlike most fanfics and I'm desperately waiting for MC to reach it to know how will everything unravel. Character Design: Perfect, I like MC despite what most people will say, he's human and he shows his humanity, most people try to make MC do things they themselves wouldn't do if put in the same situation. I love the girls, they're too cute and unique in their own way, especially Harley xD. World Background: Perfect, proper descriptions are given in every scenario and MC goes and comes across america multiple times not staying all the time in one place. Now my personal opinion, spoilers ahead: I love this series/novel, as I said before I'm not a DC fan, be it as it may, I just don't identify myself with any of the two sides of DC. Batman is too dark for me and superman is too light for me, I'd probably go for the flash but I don't like his ideology just his powers. Whatever going back in context... While reading this fanfic you will feel this distinct feeling that everything that you're reading is separated from the actual DC universe. Is like the author made a story of his own only using the locations and backgrounds of the characters in DC. That scene when they went to the penguin and Harley almost betrayed them got me so hooked that I was like hell! I don't know if that was cannon or not (probably wasn't)? But I totally loved it! Have Harley almost betray them because of her heartache and that kick he gave Diana, off I felt all that and I loved it all. This is a fresh romantic novel that takes you outside all the usual complicated politics and schemes that usually go about DC, things happen but rather than being the result of humans ambitions and the like, it is rather done by people's feelings of love and hatred, making one be able to identify oneself with them more easily different from what you would normally in DC as you know none of us is a multimillionaire as to feel identified with them in that regard. Whatever it may be as I might be just speaking nonsense as I don't know much of DC, the point is that I enjoy myself more reading this one than other more politics-focused DC fanfics around, I even enjoy it more than those smut ones that are all around and about. If I ever found a flaw here it would probably be Alice was that her name? the Housekeeper and OC. Her development as a character is too surreal, but then again she's an OC, the only way to keep her at the same level of the other characters whose background story is that deep in itself as it has already been written before, is to make mayor impactful events around her in the short while, so I won't decrease score just because of her, as she's way better OC than most I've read of. The last point is about what most people complain that is MC's personality. I really have to congratulate you here author as this is the most original and realistic transmigration sequence I've seen apart from probably Spirit Cultivation? MC was trash... Did he stop being trash just because he got a superpower? not and that's how things are, the things that are given to us don't change us, we change ourselves to cope with what comes to us. If a narrow-minded person won the lottery then he'd probably use his narrowminded to spend the money the way his rubbish mind allows him. And that's what happened with MC, he was a heartbroken neet, what makes you think that just because he got power, he will stop being that? When he got something to motivate himself with, he stopped it and that's the way it should be. Did he stop a bullet for a woman? I'd probably do it as well, regardless of if I knew DC or not. I love the harem, Harley and Pamela are lovely, I like them being villains because they changed, they're no heroes but they're not evil either. A hero that doesn't want to get his hands dirty is no hero. Greetings author and I hope you don't drop this masterpiece.

See all the rage around this fan-fic? That's the beta males with no redeeming quality in their lives. The types who think they're hot shit only to be failures. A NEET reincarnates, broken and introverted personality, and this community expects a man with balls of steels in the first chap? They keep on ridiculing the MC who thinks with his lower-half while they're only reading it for the R-18 tag. Anyways, the character personality is almost on-point and the grammar is decent too, better then half the fan-fics in this site where the MCs who get women like they're Pokemon.

One of the only few novels I have ever read that actually make a Harem work. most of the time when I see the Harem Tag for a novel I drop it because, to me, authors who are lazy and don't want to actually try developing as writers, go the Harem route. This author though does a good job of keeping the development of ALL the characters involved, although the process of adding of Harem members is questionable, but once they are in, it is Golden. Keep up the good work, and I hope you keep updating.

a harem consisting of poison ivy, harlequin, raven and lady shiva and perhaps others in the future! i mean those women alone should get you to read this story lol and if you love the DC world then you will love this!

Now that I have read even the current chapters, which is chapter 60, I can give my review, my opinion is that the author is doing a very good job, Mc (Ethan) had some thoughts at the beginning when he wanted to be a hero but abandoned the idea and that was good, he's more like a guy who does what he wants without things like Hero, villain, anti Hero, and has his harem that is developing in a fluid and good way, about Mc's strength, he is strong but for now only at the level of Superman out there, strong but not enough to face possible threats, the good that is growing (I highly recommend this fanfic)