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Fractured Through Time

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อ่านนิยาย Fractured Through Time โดย ผู้เขียน Enigma21 ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.In desperate need of money, Riven signs a deal. Riven is cast upon a foreboding land's shores and loses himself within the vast jungle. He isn't prepared to find a secret that will change his life, hi...

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In desperate need of money, Riven signs a deal. Riven is cast upon a foreboding land's shores and loses himself within the vast jungle. He isn't prepared to find a secret that will change his life, his timeline, forever.

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Bret decided to ran away to fine peace from a very disturbed life. He was the only son of the most wealthiest man in the city although his identity was kept in secret but his father provided him with everything he needs. He has no idea who his mother was and everytime he ask his father about his mother his father dont have anything to say and he would just walks out like he doesnt heard anything from Bret at all. He wanted that Bret will marry a woman whom he havent met since he turned 23 last year, but he did not agree to the marriage, all he knew is that the woman became a mistress discretly to his father. I managed one of my fathers company but my family name does not carry his so nobody really have any idea that im the son of the owner. He always remember that when his father likes a woman who works from any of his company, hes father would asked him to court them for him. So a lot of Brets office mates thought that hes a playboy, he just send these girls to his fathers house. Until one day, his father asked him for this woman whom Bret had a crush on to send her to his fathers house but he refuses to obey. The father felt so dissapointed with Bret and felt so angry that he will kill his own son anytime he wants if Bret wont obey to his command. Bret warned Catherine , his crush to not be tempted with his fathers offer, a big amount of money for a one night stand. He wanted to tell Catherine about his feeling for her but he learned that he just had an affair with one of the staff in the company. Feeling so bad from hearing the news, he went out that night to a nearby classy bar. When he spent few hours in the bar he noticed three guys just picked up a woman who cry for help, he realized that the voice seems so familiar, and so it was Catherine. The other guy pulled out a gun and shot the man who was with Catherine. Bret realized that one of the guys who grabbed her was one of his fathers bodyguard, he knew then that his father did it. The men who took the girl drive off so i followed them secretly, few minutes driving i noted that they were heading towards a mansion where my father lived so i continue to follow the car discretly until it reaches the mansion.

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Froggymine
FroggymineLv1Froggymine

Maybe I'm biased towards such texts but this novel is great. The plot is exciting and it has a wide room for extending itself. It seems to have consitantly good writing and I don't think it will disapoint anyone! 11/10

Author_Bright
Author_BrightLv10Author_Bright

The story is very catching and captivating. Nice plot I most say. The description is amazing. The synopsis also is very attractive. Can't wait to indulge in this novel.

Eclipse_Ranger
Eclipse_RangerLv2Eclipse_Ranger

Its really really interesting story if you loved any of the journey movies (journey to the center of the earth or journey to the mysterious island) you will love this it has on of craziest world buildings you can see even from the very first chapter out there love you author for writing such a fabulous piece of art

1stDaoistOfReading
1stDaoistOfReadingLv121stDaoistOfReading

I feel as though the writing quality could be improved as the author's descriptive ability is currently lacking but it's not actually bad enough for u to repulse it its actually quite doable basically a cake with all the ingredients but missing the icing that makes it look better and more attractive. The book all in all albeit 1 chapter isn't too bad and I can say that its a good first try for the author

Enigma21
Enigma21นักเขียนEnigma21

Good Novel! Love the premise. Good grammar and world building. Hope to see more chapters soon. I wish you good luck in WSA. This has a lot a potential.

Forested
ForestedLv1Forested

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JESSAZEAL
JESSAZEALLv4JESSAZEAL

it got a nice idea bro you tell the story and details nice .. however it would be very nice if continue the chapter a bit and add something that triggered more of there curiousity. hope you guys continue doing good work.

Nancy_Micheal_4985
Nancy_Micheal_4985Lv12Nancy_Micheal_4985

the book is exciting to read, and the plot and characters are outstanding I must say your book is amazing and you have quality grammar, an excellent author I can't wait for the next chapter

MrBigMan
MrBigManLv1MrBigMan

WOW! I love this book so much it is very great and awesome. This book is truly deserving of 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CharlieJames
CharlieJamesLv1CharlieJames

Wowey! Someone call an ambulance because I have no breath left! Just jokes. This debut chapter is one of, if not the best chapter I have read on this website. It includes many elements such as the beginnings of great character structure as well as building this fantastic world. I feel like I relate dearly to the main character and even made be shed a tear once or twice. I do have a few things I would like to suggest to a new author such as this brilliant one. I believe the characters should be balanced between genders and race so that it reaches and relates to the vaster majority of people. Then we can go main stream baby! I also LOVE the early mentions of the main character’s north-eastern roots and how he used to kick the sand out of boredom out the front of his bedroom window. I also use to do this but instead of sand, it was my hamster. Another point I would like to bring up during this opportunity to contact such an epic author is that your choice of title is perfect for such a tone and storyline. Even though we have not yet been emerged into the world of time in the story, I feel that I have been deeply impacted as time travels super fast while reading this book because of how emerged I get when reading it. I know for a fact that other readers feel the same way. For me, I have spent 4 hours so far reading over this 1st chapter and drawing what I believe the characters and world looks like. I have also ordered a custom bed spread from Etsy with my drawing on it. 5 stars any day.

Ethan_Arthur
Ethan_ArthurLv1Ethan_Arthur

Very fun read! can't wait for more. The characters were very interesting and I cant wait to see how they will develop over the chapters. [img=recommend]

Liam_Crout
Liam_CroutLv1Liam_Crout

Good novel. interesting start. It has a lot of potential. Perhaps because there is only one chapter, I can't give you a fully review but from what I have read, it is excellent so far. I hope hope you continue.

NB00000
NB00000Lv1NB00000

Great story so far. Excellent storytelling. I was hooked from the first paragraph. I liked the suspense and mystery. The author did an amazing job of giving vivid descriptions. I've already added the book to my library and looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Fictor
FictorLv1Fictor

Superb storytelling,the setting is refined,the detail is refined and the intense of each stanza is like a fresh patch of dopamine thats keeps the reader in high suspense.There is a tiny bit of grammatically but those can be reworked easily.Overrall a good hook and a good writing continue to pursue greater heights with my full support!

Esakome_Mariam
Esakome_MariamLv3Esakome_Mariam

A very good and interesting story line [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Spiros_Skliris
Spiros_SklirisLv1Spiros_Skliris

The book is wonderful, I love the story line, I love the idea of everything, The book looks promising, the settings are okay, Keep it up, cant wait for your updates.

Homeless_Traveler
Homeless_TravelerLv1Homeless_Traveler

the premise is interesting, the world-building is done greatly, and the elaborated explanation is perfect. this novel seems very promising. So far there's nothing to nitpick

Arklainne
ArklainneLv1Arklainne

For now, the World background is clear, though it was hard for me to visualize it clearly, you should add more details and make it extravagant so we can clearly imagine it.

yasuramaru_sama
yasuramaru_samaLv1yasuramaru_sama

I like story where there is adventure and mystery like this i am really curious about what will happen in the future. Keep writing like this you have my full support

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