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Equinox; Red Spider Lily • Hanabi

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อ่านนิยาย Equinox; Red Spider Lily • Hanabi โดย ผู้เขียน pattatass ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel."sometimes when flower blooms, the leaves became forgotten."...

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"sometimes when flower blooms, the leaves became forgotten."

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kisah ini menceritakan tentang 3sahabat yang dari kecil mereka bersama.. namun mereka berpisah kerana salah seorang dari mereka harus pergi sambung pengajian diluar negara Osaka Jepun...suatu hari mawar sedang mengajar anak muridnya disekolah mawar ialah seorang cikgu bahasa English disekolah rendah..ketika mawar sedang mengajar ada seorang lelaki mengetuk pintu kelas nya.. Farid: Assalamualaikum mawar: walaikumusalam Farid:ni kelas 2Bestari ke saya nak hantar anak saya ni nama dia Rayyan (kata Farid) mawar:Yee ni kelas 2bestari anak awak Rayyan Iskandar bin Dato'Farid Annuar?? Farid: ye betul tu mawar: hai Rayyan sini masuk kelas ada ramai kawan² dekat sini jangan malu² nama cikgu mawar binti Rosli Farid: ehh kejap..nama cikgu mawar binti Rosli?? anak ketua kampung Sri pantai betul.. mawar: Yee saya anak ketua kampung macam mana awak kenal saya Yee Farid: ni aku lah Farid alahh cucu tok Mudim tok Mudim Hassan.. ingat tak!! mawar: Ya Allah kau ke ni Farid dulu bukan hitam ke sekarang dah putih macam hantu.. Farid: Amboiii mulut sama macam dulu macam puaka ahaha manusia kan boleh berubah ,,kau apa cerita war mawar: Kerja aku inilah Farid jadi cikgu kejap aku nak tanya kau bila kau kahwin tak jemput pun erkk.. Farid: macam mana nak jemput aku kan dah pindah dekat Kelantan..kau tu suami orang mana.. mawar: ahaha aku tak kahwin lagi lah Farid so isteri kau mana tak nampak pun kerja ke? Ketika mawar menanyakan dimana isteri Farid ,,wajah Farid terus berubah seperti kesedihan dan mawar menanyakan Farid sekali lagi.. mawar: Farid kau ok tak sorry lah kalau aku tersalah cakap ke apa.. Farid: sokeyy isteri aku dah lama meninggal dunia dia meninggal ketika Rayyan dilahirkan mawar: ouh maaf yee Farid: takpelah haa ni kawan kita sorang lagi mana apa cerita dia sekarang ni si Syafiq tu sejak belajar dekat Jepun dah tak pandai balik Malaysia ehh dia.. mawar: ahahaha entahlah takde dengar khabar angin pun orang tua dia ada lagi kat kampung.. Suatu hari kecoh satu kampung ada khabar angin mengatakan yang Syafiq anak kepada ustazah Rohana dan ustaz Idris telah sampai di kampung halamannya.. mendengarkan berita tersebut Umi kepada mawar terus menelefon mawar dan berkata 'Syafiq dah balik kat sini mawar taknak jumpa dia ke' mawar yang mendengar berita tersebut terus gembira seperti putera idamannya kini pulang untuk bersama dengan nya buat Selama-lamanya..mawar begitu gembira kerana dia amat menyukai Syafiq sejak dari kecil lagi mereka bertiga membesar bersama namun mawar hanya tertarik dengan Syafiq cinta pertama nya..dan Keesokan harinya mawar pulang ke kampung dengan gembiranya sampai sahaja di kampung dia terlihat Syafiq berada didepan rumahnya sedang berbual dengan umi nya mawar.. Mawar: Assalamualaikum (dengan mengigil memberi salam) Syafiq: waalaikumusalam hai mawar Namun terlihat Putera idamannya yang masih ingat dirinya mawar terus pengsan.. Apabila mawar tersedar dia melihat Syafiq yang berada disebelah nya sedang membasahi kain untuk letakkan pada dahinya mawar..terus bangun. mawar: kau ke ni Syafiq?? Syafiq: yelh aku lah Fiq masa kecik² kita selalu main kahwin-kahwin dekat pondok cik Esah ingat lagi tak? mawar: mesti lah aku ingat masa tu kau panggil aku sayang terus aku lari balik rumah ahaha.. Syafiq: haa kau apa khabar makin cantik sekarang aku nampak macam bakal makmum aku (tersenyum malu Syafiq memuji mawar ) mawar: ada² je kau ni Fiq kau pun apa kurangnya makin hensem macam bakal imam aku .. kedua-duanya mereka sangat gembira dapat bertemu semula dengan sahabat yang sudah lama terpisah namun didalam hati mawar tiada sesiapa yang tahu mengapa mawar tidak lagi mempunyai pasangan kerana ia menunggu si putera idaman nya cinta mawar terhadap Syafiq tidak pernah berubah dari dulu lagi sedikit pun mawar tidak pernah lupakan semuanya tentang Syafiq..Namun???

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My Feelings Towards My Childhood Possessive Sweetheart Gradually Rises!

The Shen family was good at doing business, and their assets were boundless. In other words, they were the winner in life, but only the Shen family knew that wasn’t true. They had seven sons, but all they really wanted was a daughter! The Shen family continued to work hard and finally got the girl they wanted! However, they hadn’t had enough of the baby before the third young master of the Xue family secretly stole her home. From then on, the temperament of Xue Chenkong, the Xue family’s third young master who suffered from severe autism and was usually irritable and gloomy, changed. When the baby cried, he quickly coaxed her patiently. When the baby was thirsty, he immediately got water for her. When the baby went to school, he carried her small school bag and followed her, not leaving her a single step. When the baby got into a fight… What?! Someone dared to bully his Baby Ting?! Get that person out of here, right now!***Shen Manting was a twenty-year-old genius doctor. She had her CEO parents who doted on her, and seven older brothers who protected her. In other words, she was a winner in life. The only thing that others pitied her for was the little tail that had been following behind her for twenty years.Shen Manting married Xue Chenkoong when she was twenty, and all the women in the city breathed a sigh of relief. Their fear of Xue Chenkong only grew by the day, and they could only lament and do nothing! It seems that the Shen family’s daughter didn’t manage to shake off the Xue family’s crazy lunatic and even married him in the end!

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brian_hombre
brian_hombreLv2brian_hombre

This is pattatass, I'm currently using my boyfriend's account. For those who are confused about the updates, I usually type 10 updates for a story and will update them in one. The grammar, spelling, typos, and a little bit plot holes are the hardest to polish. So please, understand me too because this is my way of writing. Thank you so much for reading.

L_Asterisk
L_AsteriskLv3L_Asterisk

What happen to your story? This is one of the first story I have read here. I hope to see more chapters in this. I enjoyed it. I will support this if I see new updates.

maesi_lee
maesi_leeLv1maesi_lee

Hello po ate paaaat nabasa ko yung promotion mo po sa wattpad about this story hehe nakakabigla kasi di ka nasulat duon ng english books kasi sabi mo po nahihiya ka kaya akala namin you are not that fluent hehe yun pala dito ka maglalabas ng galing. Goodkuck po ate pattatass! You are one of my faves author sa wattpad po ^_^ waiting po ako ng English story mo sa wattpad ^_^

Shane_Beryl
Shane_BerylLv2Shane_Beryl

I really like your story. I just wish you add more chpaters for us to read! I would have gvn you more stars if you had more updates. Full support to this novel!

Vaspt
VasptLv3Vaspt

As one of the author's competitors against I really like your writing quality. Your comedy for this webnovel is genuine but has unique sequence storyline. Your only problem is your stability of update for your webnovel

springmin
springminLv1springmin

Came here from wattpad. I haven't started reading your work though but I'm sure it'll be worth the read even though I am not a mobile legend player. Its just quite awkward bcoz I used to read Bangtan fan fictions of yours. Goodluck for joining, author nim ;) God bless po. #Happy6thAnniv to us! :D

AGUSTDADDIE
AGUSTDADDIELv1AGUSTDADDIE

Otor-nim ate patatas update ka naman na sa ttd mo ohh haha sabi mo dba magpopost ka nang dalawang sabay na ud kapag nanalo ka dito? Aasahan namin yon eunnie. Sana mabuhay pa si Nathan baba hahaha Goodluck ate patatas!!!

juancock
juancockLv1juancock

Five golden stars for my favorite wattpad author~ Naglalabasan ang mga tagasuporta mo eunnie omona!~ sabi ko sayo worth it ang pag promote sa wattpad eyy! Waiting na po kaming mga readers mo sa english story mo sa Wattpad! Go Eunnie!~

caramelmacchiato
caramelmacchiatoLv1caramelmacchiato

Nabasa ko na po, ate Pat. This is thicctionary from, wp. Overall, your story is good. I thought I was the only one who supported you from your wattpad readers heol. I am very happy that you're exploring more to improve, I remember you told us that you're afraid to write in English because you are very insecure. But, goodjob ate Pat. Ang ganda ng story for a beginner(parang di naman po ehh hahahah). Good luck po :*

PRINCESS143
PRINCESS143Lv1PRINCESS143

Ate Pat bakit ngayon lang kayo nag promote sa wattpad huhuhu sorry po ngayon ko lang din nabasa yung promotion niniyo. Good luck po ate sa pag sali. Hwaiting !

baeV_nim
baeV_nimLv1baeV_nim

Author-niiiiiiiimmm!! ~~ nakita ko rin sa wakas itong gawa mo hihi. I'm surprised that you're writing in English herr spokening dollars ka na ate Pat!! Very proud of you as an old reader sa wattpad. Update mo na po yung ttd peuleeeaseee~~~

Princess_Baoy
Princess_BaoyLv1Princess_Baoy

What happen to the updates? The short is quite good and then quality if writing is good too.. But the updates are not. I'm so sorry but please update your story. But overall, this is good to read.

Julius_Yanny
Julius_YannyLv1Julius_Yanny

Dahil mapilit ka Pia na maglagay ako ng 5 stats sa gawa mo, ito na ito na!!! Alam kong gustong gusto mo itong contest na ito. Pero hindi enough na gusto mo lang ha? You need to put more determination since I can see what your story hole is. Apdeyt apdeyt din kapag may time ehe? As a friend and a cousin, you need to work harder kung ayaw mo kutusan kita.

SOPEDDAENG
SOPEDDAENGLv1SOPEDDAENG

I'm not surprised that you are here, patty. When you announced in wp that you're joining, I already knew that you would. You have a good number of wp followers yet you didn't focused in promoting on wp instead you chose to promote it on fb when you only have 500 friends *claps otor-nim* As a friend, I may say that your first english story is well-written (you told us that your not confident, WHY???) but please update hahahaha even in wp you're updating once every 2 months. Your readers are hungry for your update, patty! But ok, keep up the good work. Hwaiting!!!!

kleur
kleurLv1kleur

I would've given you 5 stars if you update more often. You can write, but the chapters are cliff hanging. This story is good and it will have a spot in my library and support list. I just wish that this would be updated sooner or later because I bet your readers are waiting too. Good luck to the contest!!

Pedpedped
PedpedpedLv2Pedpedped

เผยเนื้อหาสำคัญ

Psy_Duck
Psy_DuckLv1Psy_Duck

WOAH I LIKE THIS! Very interesting idea! I hope you can put more context in your sypnosis tho so you can draw more people in to read cuz this story is really more than meets the eye :)

jaja_tes_orio
jaja_tes_orioLv1jaja_tes_orio

gusto mo realtalk pre? hindi kagandahan itong gawa mo napakacliche tapos halata na you are winning dahildahil sa kasikatan. kawawa kanaman kahit nagagalingan si lasayo hindi mo parin mapaganda itong gawa mo. Bajsoakwnahxiodnsbwhsoqoqngxd asdfghjklasdfghjklasjdlapapqiwuebdnxmslapquzndux nsisoalwmwnxhxuowpwmwnwhxuxosomwwnshix usowowmanbxjcueopwpwlwjwnbxhxoslwnna hsowkqnsnxjidpapqnwnshuxodowmwnahxuix hakaoamanzhuziskskaknhsiks troll review :D

000_bernice_000
000_bernice_000Lv1000_bernice_000

Why is this story got in the top 10? Only few chapters. The writer is lazy. Do you think you will win? NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING. NO UPDATE? UNDESERVING.

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