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Elio/Raven

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Despite his illegitimate birth status, Elio is the third child of a great family. from birth he was never the best or the worst at anything, except his face. When his brother finally succumbed to resentment and decided to get rid of him due to his embarrassing origin he decided to live out his own life as his own person for once! without the pressure of his family! How? by using his face and becoming the top idol! Note: This is an entry for the contest under The path to Idoldom! if you like it the pls vote! IF there is anyone here who knows me from my regular work (https://www.webnovel.com/book/11508563905415205/Cerin) then you'll know that I'm really working hard at these rapid releases. :')

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Perverted Daddy System

“What the fuck? What is going on? Have I completely lost it?” As I stare panicky at the dot unable to decide what to do, the white dot disappears and a line of text appears in its place. [Installing files. 1% done…] As I watch the text in shock, the percentage gradually increases. […2%...3%...4%...] I move to the living room in a zombie-like manner, too shocked to think clearly and lie down on the couch. “Something is wrong with me; I think I finally lost my sanity…” […12%...13%...14%...] Unable to affect the situation in the least, I stare dejectedly at the percentage increase, while my mind starts exploring the possible explanations. In the end, as the percentage hits 90%, I narrow it down to three possibilities. The first possibility is that I am in fact still unconscious and this is all a product of my mind. I pinch myself and whimper at the pain, as in my nervousness I used almost all my strength. Nope, the first is out. The second possibility is that I have completely lost my mind and am suffering from delusions. Hmm, I cannot exclude this, but while possible, I don’t think that this is it. The only thing out of the ordinary is that fucking line of text. The third possibility … [Installation successful!] The text disappears and a new message appears in my eyes… The third possibility … is that I gained a system. I read the message with my mouth agape at the implications. [Welcome user, to the Perverted Daddy System!] Fuck… TAGS: Mind control, manipulation, corruption, sleep sex, rape, blackmail, oyakodon

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Adevhine
AdevhineLv5Adevhine

I would like to see him at the top. It would be a resounding slap to the others' faces after all~ Although the plot is a bit cliche, but I wanna know more~ Master jie jie fighting!

Bibliophile_Anna
Bibliophile_AnnaLv5Bibliophile_Anna

Let me leave 5 stars for this novel. Initially, the plot is really good. I can already see that this story will peak my interest. I hope you have more chapters to upload. Continue with your work and good luck. I've noticed that there are really quite a number of talented young writers in WN. (Yourself included.) I wish everyone of us, the best of luck. Fighting!😊

Yuyumamoru
YuyumamoruLv4Yuyumamoru

I like your book so far. Though three chapters don't have a lot of development I just want to say that the only thing I would correct is your grammar. Instead of a lowercase 'i' it needs to be capitalized.

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