El Rugido del Dragón.

In the scarce 18 chapters that I have read so far I can say that it is one of my favorite ASOIAF fanfics, the plot is interesting and it uses the well-known context of ASOIAF very well. Writing: I quite liked the writing, the author has taken as a model the style of GRRM himself, developing multiple perspectives well linked to each other update: it has been regular with at least one chapter so far. development of the story: The story has been interesting, the small changes that have been made to give rise to Daeron and save Joanna have given rise to a whole change in the world that becomes more and more interesting, if there is something to criticize it is that the changes of perspective are not expressly indicated, which means that a lot of attention is needed so as not to lose the thread of the story. character design: In this aspect the author has performed very well in portraying the personality present in the ASOIAF books while Daeron himself has a unique and well-defined personality, with relationships established in a logical and very original way for most of the characters. fanfics that we are used to. world development: This is probably the worst aspect of the novel, to the point that the places where the characters are are not usually described and the author assumes that readers know the world context, although it is not necessary that a fanfic be I concentrated especially on the construction of the world, since all this information is in the original work, by giving information about the context of the characters in each scene, it makes the readers deviate from the development of the plot. This review is to encourage the author to continue showing us the adventures of Daeron until the end as well as giving advice on how to add POV indications as well as a greater effort in the construction of the scenarios for the construction of the world, I love this fanfic I hope be helpful (this review is done by google translate, since my writing in english is very bad, please forgive grammatical aspects)