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Doomsday: Godly System

นักเขียน: mannatbir_singh
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one real love story from nepal

She was a beautiful girl, who had just finished school and started going to college! A "handsome" young man is seen near the gate of his house, who is seen there every day, when he goes to college, when he comes, the young man is always there! when do you see sometimes smile Sometimes he bows his head in shame! Sometimes eye to eye, Sometimes they suddenly meet their eyes while watching with a stealthy gaze, Both smile, but can not speak! Daily life goes like this, almost a year has passed and this process is going on. But no one could talk, The girl liked That young man surely likes me. Sometimes she started to like that young man, However, looking at the simple-looking young man was attractive! The girl did not talk to her friends! All the things were not told, and they also assumed that 'I must like you'. And advised to talk once! One day the young woman dared to say - 'I will always see you here. I know what's on your mind, I waited a long time, Perhaps you will make the first proposal. The beginning of the conversation is that you will do it! But you never speak, maybe you hesitate to say what's on your mind, That's why I dared to say to you, Yes, I love you, very much... I love you... Be sure to come to my house. Talk to my parents and marry me!! The young man was nervous after hearing this from the young woman. He boldly said- Don't listen.. I was so nervous.. But I'm actually sitting here, the password is not there on the Wifi of your house. That's why I'm sitting here to use the free internet.

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NowGoWithTheFlow
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Author you need to work on your grammar because in just the first chapter I had a hard time reading your novel. By all means I can easily read it but how you wrote it is wrong. I like your plot so far though orphan is used alot. Don't give up pls

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Please please please go through, and edit. I was only able to get half way through the first page before a headache started to set in. this story has potential, but you need to fix the vocabulary problems.

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