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Dominating system

นักเขียน: Lazzyscholar
Eastern Fantasy
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  • 3.7
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อ่านนิยาย Dominating system โดย ผู้เขียน Lazzyscholar ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Lin Feng reincarnates in a world of martial artists after dying trying to save a kid Our mc was reborn and considered a waste whose meridians blocked from birth .but so what he has system to help him...

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Lin Feng reincarnates in a world of martial artists after dying trying to save a kid Our mc was reborn and considered a waste whose meridians blocked from birth .but so what he has system to help him.see how our mc becomes the strongest and faceslap his opponents..

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Shadows Stirred by Love

In the sprawling metropolis of modern-day Shanghai, Liu Wei, the young and charismatic leader of the Liu triad, finds himself drawn to Zhang Wei, a brilliant hacker with a mysterious past. Despite the dangers that lurk in the shadows of their criminal world, Liu Wei and Zhang Wei embark on a forbidden romance, their love igniting a spark of hope in the darkness. But as their relationship deepens, so too does the threat of betrayal. Rumors swirl of a traitor in their midst, threatening to unravel the fragile peace that Liu Wei has worked so hard to maintain. When a cryptic message reveals the identity of the traitor as Liu Wei's own brother, Chen Wei, their world is thrown into chaos. Determined to uncover the truth and bring the traitor to justice, Liu Wei and Zhang Wei embark on a perilous quest through the underworld, where danger lurks around every corner and betrayal awaits them at every turn. With their love as their only guide, they must navigate the treacherous waters of deception and loyalty, knowing that their bond may be the only thing strong enough to withstand the shadows that threaten to consume them. In a city where power is the ultimate currency and alliances are forged and broken with the flick of a switchblade, Liu Wei and Zhang Wei must confront their deepest fears and insecurities as they fight to protect each other and reclaim their rightful place in the shadows. But as they soon discover, the path to redemption is fraught with danger, and the price of love may be higher than they ever imagined. "Shadows of Desire" is a captivating tale of love, betrayal, and redemption set against the backdrop of modern-day organized crime, where the bonds of loyalty are tested and the shadows hold secrets that can shatter even the strongest of hearts.

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PineHeinKyaw
PineHeinKyawLv10PineHeinKyaw

really gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

Brian371
Brian371Lv4Brian371

IS THIS DROP?!?!?!?!? WHY U DROOP THIS ...... ..... .... ... I MEAN PLEASE TELL ME IF THIS IS DROP CAUSE ITS. BEEN 3 MONTHS SINCE THE LAST REVIEWER AND I DONT KNOW HOW TO CHECK IF YU UPDATED A NEW CHAPTER

Daoist1rvBov
Daoist1rvBovLv1Daoist1rvBov

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Caprotx_Same
Caprotx_SameLv1Caprotx_Same

Please update 😭it's a great story Please please please please please please pleeeeeeeeeèeeeesssssse update

GodWriter
GodWriterLv3GodWriter

Great story....I like a lot the system part and I hope the story goes on with more chapters...the author should try to take the story again and write the next chapters

zd4zaas
zd4zaasLv1zd4zaas

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Abderrahim_Faouel
Abderrahim_FaouelLv2Abderrahim_Faouel

Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Insaen
InsaenLv10Insaen

PLEASE NEED MORE CHAPTERS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

WangShen
WangShenLv5WangShen

Though the story is great, there is some aspect that needs a big improvement. First, the writing, grammars are somewhat bad and the way the characters are developed. Second, I think that the development of the story is so fast. I advise you to improve your writing quality.

junnyingg
junnyinggLv15junnyingg

The grammar and spelling makes it hard to read. I can't even finish the first paragraph with all that grammatical and spelling errors. Please read through before posting the chapter and even if English isn't your first language, you can always find someone to help you.

kingcosmo1
kingcosmo1Lv4kingcosmo1

The grammer is so bad...no offence it still need improvement in story develope and world developement.....................the mc is just plainly just gettin abilities from the system. U have to explain how he got dat power and first of all u did intergrate in the story how the mc got the system... at least introduce the system first and also explain the hierarchy

Cunt_Dooku
Cunt_DookuLv6Cunt_Dooku

Grammar, spelling and the language make it hard to enjoy. The story seems to be good but they way in which it’s written is terrible... In other words even if you’d like to enjoy reading it, it’s impossible because of mistakes and misspelling amassed.

arron
arronLv6arron

Chapters are short if possible make them little long. Over all novel is goooooooddddddddd one, looking forward to its future chapters. writing quality is good, overall character and world development are also good. Overall novel is very good.

Nimish_Gupta
Nimish_GuptaLv4Nimish_Gupta

Hay 1st and 2nd chapter is same please do something about it It is reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaalllllllyyyyyyy toooooooo good so keep it up And if possible increase the release rate the more the better,😁

NightOps
NightOpsLv5NightOps

Break'n it down for you: *Quality: stars lost due to constant errors in spelling/typos, grammar and punctuation. Recommend getting an editor; i'm not trying to be mean saying this, "please ask your English lit. teacher to look over your chapters before posting." *Updates: N/A(not applicable to loss due to writer not promising anything). *Story: fast paced almost to the point of being incongruous or disjointed. *Characters: yet another cultivation system that defies all odds... *Background: no or very few details given when introducing things such as the world he currently is in or the hierarchy of the families mentioned.

CZ2128_Delta
CZ2128_DeltaLv6CZ2128_Delta

check and re-check the chapters before posting.. also work on your grammar :) continue on working best of luck...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

sonu_ks
sonu_ksLv12sonu_ks

Its such a pain to read. Please improve spelling and sentences. Overall i think it will be good story to read if the flaws are removed otherwise it is pain to read even a single sentence.

Respectedone
RespectedoneLv4Respectedone

What's the updating schedule '' :'' `'' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' '' :::::::::::::::'::::::::::::::::::"" "" “"" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "" "

Lord_Cosmos
Lord_CosmosLv5Lord_Cosmos

Since the story has system I like it. But chapters are short, many spell checks and incorrect sentence formations.so far the story is good.No info on world background.

nadijr
nadijrLv5nadijr

like the story so far, the writing has some problems, i didn't understad much of chapther 3, but I like the novel sadasddadsadsadadkdojasndapndpjadnfdjadfnapisbf 140?

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