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De Right one

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What is De Right one

อ่านนิยาย De Right one โดย ผู้เขียน hotdave1 ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.A 17 year old teenager who has to fit into a new family ,school and city, but one thing that always get him into trouble is the opposite gender; girls... with his curly hair and cute dimples.. he's li...

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A 17 year old teenager who has to fit into a new family ,school and city, but one thing that always get him into trouble is the opposite gender; girls... with his curly hair and cute dimples.. he's like magnet for the young and old.

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Altier; The Triology

It is said that when the Door of Truth is opened, immense power will be granted to those who were able to unlock it. However, it can only be opened by the keys "the world itself" has granted to seven heroes the gods themselves have chosen. An intelligent witch whose only purpose in life is to oppose the Demon Kings. An elusive mercenary who thirst for vengeance on demons and hell itself. A freedom fighter who struggles against humanity's slovenly nature. A prideful angel who wants to protect their home and place in Heaven. A powerful demihuman who yearns for justice and a world of equality. A kind elf who takes from the strong and gives to the poor. And finally, a young man who carries great ambitions. Exactly seven heroes, huh. And out of the millions of people that exist, I was chosen to be one of them. Not that I'm complaining. It's just that, fate really is a funny thing-... But I do wonder. What lies on the other side of this game that we play? What exactly is the dark truth of this world? I'll find out, no matter what happens. Even if it means exploiting those close to me. ~~~ The Thumbnail art is not my creation. All the credit however goes to the ones who first made this beautiful masterpiece. If you are the artist and you not like it, please contact me and I shall remove it at my earliest convenience. There is no NTR, per say. This story is one part of the "Trilogy" series because this book itself is one of the three main stories that makes up the true story of the Altier franchise, so please look forward to that. Now with that said. Get yourself comfortable with some snacks, music, toys( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°), and start reading!

Redacted_ · แฟนตาซี
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Hard Knocks

"I will seize my destiny for myself in this new world. I will obtain the freedom I seek, or die in it's pursuit." Eric Zakhele Xolani-Xing, 29 years old- Protagonist African/Chinese American Former underground cage fighter, Olympic boxer, wrestler and mixed martial artist. Born in a small town in Northern California, USA, to a Zulu African father and a Chinese mother from Hong Kong. Brother to Aaron Jabulani Xolani-Xing. Parents died in a car accident when he was 17, resulting in him taking care of Aaron from then on. The deaths had happened the day after he had won a gold medal in Olympic wrestling and before he won the gold in boxing, the news only reaching him the day after. He would go on to college on a full ride scholorship for wrestling, getting a degree in finance by the time he was 20. Served in the military on active duty until he was 22. Joined the UFC, with Aaron as his manager/coach, and swept 3 belts from their respective weight classes until he was 25. Having a perfect record, he sought out for more challenges and found an underground fighting league. He went around the world fighting in cage fights against all kinds of opponents, some if whom even used weapons. He fought them all bare handed, rarely receiving a scratch. It was then that his brother Aaron was approached by a man who simply went by Mr. Long. He informed him that Eric was to lose his next fight, with a reward of 4 times the normal prize money, and that failing to comply would not in his "best interest". Aaron told Eric, they agreed to leave the underground, which lead to them being brought before a Yakuza boss that served as Mr. Long's superior. He held Aaron hostage while Eric went to the next fight where he was to take a dive in the second round. The option was stolen from him in the first round however, when his opponent fell over from a heart attack after attacking him wildly for 2 minutes. The boss actually took the loss with grace and allowed the two brothers to leave with no repercussions, believing Eric to be a bad omen for him and his men. Mr. Long however, had been siphoning money from the organization and had taken a much larger loss than anyone that fight. In a rage, he found Aaron and shot him in the back of the head in broad daylight outside of a grocery store in Amsterdam. Eric, who had been out on a morning run, returned to find his brother being taken away on a stretcher. CCTV and eyewitnesses revealed who had done it. And so Eric began his rampage in pursuit of the man. After 3 years of chasing him around the world, he eventually concluded his revenge. Followed immediately by his own demise. Only to awake in a new world, in a younger body, and with a new mountain of adversity before him. Now he seeks freedom. For that he will need status. For status he will need power. For power... he will need to fight.

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"Actually, the slice-of-life atmosphere is very strong and enjoyable. However, there are quite a few mistakes that end up overshadowing the strengths of this novel. Issues such as the use of emoticons, repetitive and limited vocabulary, and a lack of emotional pull. In my opinion, the beginning could have allowed readers to feel the same emotions as Jay, but your writing obscured all of that. Try improving the quality of your writing; I'm sure this novel will be delightful."

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