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Ch-1, WHAT IN THE NAME OF GOD IS CULTIVATION ?!

...ng Ya... ang Ya... YANG YA !!! WAKE UP THE YOUNG LADY IS HERE TO GET YOU. " What, where am I ?" I thought to myself while opening my eyes. "WHAT WHERE IS THIS PLACE ?" I proclaimed. " You moron what are you saying right now, are you planning on keeping the young lady ? Huh ? answer me" said the tall muscley man with a bald head, that looked like a light bulb. "Sorry to disturb you but who are you... no... who... who am I ?" I said acting like I had lost my memories.

"Oh dear heavens of all the times why must he had lost his memories when the young lady of the Su family is waiting outside. What should we do, our whole village will be destroyed from a single word from her."

At this moment I heard footsteps outside the room I was in, a graceful figure walked in from there, she had silky white hair and a fair skin tone that would make even the happiest man lose his mind after one look at her.

She walked towards where as was lying down, the muscley man quickly cupped his hands and said "Welcome young lady Su, I didn't want to keep you waiting but this rascal is acting as If he has lost his memories so I am not sure what to do." " Lost his memories !?" the one surnamed Su said in a surprising tone. After which the surprised look in her face turned into a smile, "Maybe that's for the best" she said while walking towards me. "You are Yang Ya and you are supposed to become my servant after today" she said, I was surprised from what I heard. I guess it was too obvious from my reaction as she said with a smile on her face "Do you not want to become my servant ?". "Who would ?" I thought to myself but before I could say anything the muscley man said " He wouldn't dare it's an honour for a person like him with no cultivation to become the young ladys servant".

"Did I ask you the question ?" the one surnamed Su said in a cold voice while looking at the man, it was as if an icy cold energy was coming out of her body which was extremely cold, the muscley man bowed down while screaming " Please forgive me young lady it was my mistake, please stop the crystal cold divine art, I will never make this mista... " but before he could finish his sentence he was already a lump of ice.

I looked at the scene horrified wondering what was happening here, what is the thing called 'Cultivation' and what is this 'crystal cold divine art' and most importantly what was about to happen to me.

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To be continued...

Sorry If the first chapter was too small I just wanted to see if you guys liked this or you had any ideas or tips you could offer about the story as this is my first time writing a proper novel. I would love hear your thoughts so feel free to comment.

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