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Black gold

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Advice for WN Authors

Aight bois. This is coming from an author and a reader: most of y'all's writing sucks. Readers shouldn't have to turn their brains off to enjoy your writing... That's just forcing them to be a zombie and mindlessly passing time by, ain't no enjoyment there. So in case you couldn't tell already, this will be very blunt. Thus, here's some things to keep in mind as you read. 1. If you're just going to hear and not listen, skedaddle. Hearing is having it go through one ear and out the other, listening is paying attention and making the effort to understand. 2. Toss your pride away. Yeet it across the ocean. I've seen sooo many authors unable to take constructive criticism and INSIST on improper grammar because they couldn't admit they did something wrong. 3. If you think your writing is good, then it's terrible. Simple. Reason: If you think your writing is good, then you stop looking for ways to improve it and it stagnates. Even the best of the best authors (on wn and traditional books) have room for improvement so don't be like "ah it's good enough" or "there's no where else to improve." 4. Don't listen aggressively. I.e. listening only to find faults in what the person says and use it disprove their claim. One example is waiting for your opponent to make a grammar mistake.  This is different from debate tactics to lead your opponent into logical trap and use their fallacies they accidentally left behind to invalidate everything they said. It's hard to notice, but the main difference is that someone who listens aggressively is no longer open minded or calm. They're usually narrow minded and stubborn to admit they're wrong in those moments and are very easy to manipulate bc they're blinded so ye. Did I leave some traps within the logic presented here? Maybe. Don't be an idiot and you won't have to find out. Side note: apologies if this boi comes off as ranting, bc it is. The average wn quality is on par with mtl childrens books, which is infuriating bc now there's hardly anything good left to read.

sinc · สมัยใหม่
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14 Chs

Arifureta: From World's Strongest to Omni-Strongest.

This story have been dropped. It was because I overwhelmed myself with the world building I had in mind after the original storyline in Tortus was done with. I felt the original story had a lot of potential with the OP Gods age Magic and I planned to expand that idea but being my first story I overdid myself and stopped. I'm sorry if I've disappointed readers who like the direction my fanfic was going. ........ Shawn Spencer is reincarnated into Japan as Kenshiro Kiyama after his unsurprising death. For the first eighteen years of his new life, Ken trained with every given opportunity since he knew that a case of reincarnation will always be followed by chaos. He later learns that this new world is that of Arifureta when he later transfers to Hagime's school. With prior knowledge and a twisted taste for adventure, Ken places his plan into motion as he awaits the summoning circle. In the fantasy world of Tortus, things however starts to take a turn as he again underestimate the things he thinks are exciting even though he did not start in a common place like the OG MC. Follow him as he re-writes the story whilst exploring the big unseen parts. --------- Although this fanfic will be a Harem, the mc will not have a thousand women. Most likely, I will write so that he has a certain relationship with some female characters. --- hey come check out Discord with me https://discord.gg/pAX6BNQu ___________________ This my first novel but I will do everything in my power to make this as enjoyable as the source material. Comment and share your thoughts so that I may improve. ___________________ Disclaimer: All characters, places and circumstances are all works of fiction and shouldn't be mirrored to real life. At least five chapters a week unless something unexpected happens The cover is not mine, So if the original owner wants it, reach out to me in the comments section or my discord.

Fluffy_Menace · แฟนตาซี
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69 Chs

Lucky Bastard

Don't ................... I looked to my side to look at the gorgeous holding my hand one I'm very sure I saw three days ago when I was disguising at the mall that sapphire blue eye are hard to come across and you can hardly forget them I looked at her with disgust that she hold me no one dare hold me like this as she motion her head towards the spilled drink on the bar that when I realized that I would have ruined my precious suit if not for her I gazed into her eye for a long time before my mouth refuse to listen to my heart Luther: you really like hiding a lot at first behind a Vail now it behind a mask since it a ghost party she can't recognize me I'm on mask like wise she is also she looked at me for a very long time before holding my wrist and dragging along with her and this is the first it happened she opened a door like a changing room slammed the door after us and my back hit the door firmly Paige : as we don't know each other I don't know you and I'm pretty sure you might have seen me before but you will never be able to recognize me, we might as well get this over with" and with that statement she slam her lips on mine tiptoeing on her extremely high heels before she could reach my lips I opened my lips hungrily and devour her, her hand went straight to my slack and squeeze my already angry shaft that already started driping with pre cum I break the kiss and moan as she squeeze me hard I look into her sapphire blue eyes I take my hand to remove her mask but her other hand stopped me Paige: tonight party rules you can't remove the mask Ray: I want to see you bunny please Paige: only my dad call me that but no this is no strings attached I don't even want to know who you are it a night stand do you want it or not?......

Omobola_Ayinke · แฟนตาซี
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