Battlefield Restart

Can't say I've read the book I will now simply for the sake of properly reviewing it, but I'm reviewing to counterbalance some stupid fool who reviewed multiple times.

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Great Story with a unique twist on the development of strength. The only downfall is the release rate of chapters that is a little erratic. Although this can be disappointing, but at least the chapter quality is better than other original works. Hopefully the chapter release rate can become more consistent. Thanks for the story!!

Hello~! Stuman (Original/Co Author) here all for a quick review about my own story! Now you guys may be thinking how the writer can shamelessly praise his writing (which is about 46 chapters of the story for me) when constructive criticisms are usually given by readers by their discretion. Well... Look at the other reviews on my novel and you won’t find anything that remotely describes what you are going to read. So let me, the person who wrote it, enlighten you new readers for what you’re in for! If you came here with the intention of reading about a generic Gary Stue (Mary Sue) being the upstanding and morally correct person that he is and showing those other less morally correct people who’s boss, then this story isn’t for you. In fact, if you’re going in trying to find something unoriginal that you can relate to others of its genre, then this story STILL isn’t for you! What you’re going to get while reading this story is seeing how a damaged old man with a harsh past life being shamelessly childish despite his age. You may be wondering why I don’t follow the stereotype and make him a stoic badass with his backstory. Some even say that I don’t even put effort into the story since I made him sociopathic, childish, and a fricking liar despite what he says in his monologues. However, what I’ve written in those monologues ARE NOT mistakes. The story I’ve written is quite unique because one: I don’t hold the readers hand and give him mountains of explanations all at once and slowly explain things throughout the story, and two: I give you, the reader, the choice on how to view the main character instead of shoving a brief explanation on his personality down your throat. His reincarnation is imperfect and everything gets explained the more you read the story. His personality is expressed through his hypocrisy and the MC slowly matures little by little over the course of the slow beginning of my story. This story is more about how he deals with life through his eyes than an epic tale of a soldier taking over the world. To me, the MC’s monologues are in his OWN bias and sociopathic perspective so it’s only natural he won’t be able to objectively see himself in another person’s standpoint. He’s an unreliable narrator who you can’t trust at face value, but that’s what makes this story so interesting to write~ I’m not saying that this story I wrote is the ‘greatest’ or anything but it’s best not to have any misconceptions going into the story. As always, you can support this novel with power stones and stuff whenever possible! Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy yourself~!

This story is probably not for a new reader, it is however a complex story that starts off in my opinion quite slow and confusing. But once you put the prices together and finish reading up to chapter 40 you can get a pretty good idea if you like it or not and understand it... I found it a good read by the finish of its current chapters

The book was a solid 9/10 and barely had any errors if any. I actually found it amazing and loved it. Just 1 problem.... The readers would care more about the reincarnated 80 year old behaving like a kid when in fact he is a kid, teenager instead of the story/Plot. I enjoyed reading the book and you will too. If you Can ignore the amazingly annoying comments that just shock you at how toxic and rude the audience is. Enjoy! ❤

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Worth the read. A good twist on transmigration/reincarnation novel. I tried to make this brief since it wouldn't let me do a review yesterday now I know I need 140 characters. Something that I exceeded yesterday.

O Novel estava bem feito tinha muito para crescer ..uma pena que o autor deixou seu público ter mais voz que ele.. para quem escreve úm novel amador , você pode aceitar a crítica, aceitar o conselho, mas ñ deve aceitar que isso te influencia na escrita que está escrevendo, deixou um grande novel cair... autor novo, como leitor, acredito no potencial do novel , tenha um bom caminho...

Your missing a chapter fix it! No point in reading it if I have no idea what happening. And I truly hope this doesnt happen again as it just ruins the story overall.

The MC is supposed to be an 80 year old retired soldier, but behaves like a whiny millenial. Author should look at Superstars of Tommorow. Same premise, same backstory, minus the magic, plus the sci-fi. This is how an old MC should behave; less emotions, less complaining, more wisdom, more experienced, calm as a lake and deep as an ocean. Think Denzel Washington in Equalizer, or Liam Neeson in Taken. Even with the MCs tragic backstory, he is sounding like a broken teenager instead of a broken old man.

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