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Ancient Doomsday In MHA (HIATUS)

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What is Ancient Doomsday In MHA (HIATUS)

อ่านนิยาย Ancient Doomsday In MHA (HIATUS) โดย ผู้เขียน KeiJu ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.The story of a young man who wished to be Doomsday!!!NO HAREM!!!---------------------------------------------------------Tristram Torres who had been alone all his life due to his Physical deformities...

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The story of a young man who wished to be Doomsday !!!NO HAREM!!! --------------------------------------------------------- Tristram Torres who had been alone all his life due to his Physical deformities, and dedication to his studies dies and gets the chance to meet God (Not a God of any earthly religion). He is allowed to make three wishes, after which God sends him on a Mission to a World of his (MC's) choosing. ---Wishes Below--- --------------------------------------------------------- 1- To always have the properties of Doomsday (The original Kryptonian one) but to also be able to change into him in order to access his other Powers(Massive superhuman strength, speed, stamina and agility Nigh Invulnerability, Regeneration, Reactive adaptation, Self-evolution, Immortality, Razor-sharp claws, teeth, and bony spurs) 2-To have control over Kinetic Energy 3-To be able to get stronger infinitely by absorbing any kind of radiation Multiverse? You might be asking. YES Multiverse. Not in the early stages of this novel but yes. After all, theres not really a challenge for Doomsday in MHA is there? But then again, is there one anywhere? Worlds: MHA Marvel (MCU) -open- This is just something im working on out of boredom so dont expect much from the upload time. Im not really an avid comic reader so correct me if im wrong about anything regarding Doomsdays Powers. Im doing this cause theres not really a fanfic for Doomsday so yeah. --------------------------------------------------------- I'll do my best to update every friday starting the 3rd(June), after which I'll update as much as possible during the summer holiday :) --------------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: I own... well nothing and all credit goes to the respective owners or whatever idk I didn't study law. But yeah I don't own any of the characters :)

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Thunder Disciple: Spearman's Journey

[Dear readers, I am terribly sorry to inform that this novel will be on indefinite hiatus. I have recently dealt with real life issues which have led me to not have the time to write. I have thirty stockpiled chapters under my other book, "Villain Becomes the Main Character" that will release weekly. There will be a mass release of five chapters on the 14th January. Once again, I'm sorry for this, and I hope everyone would be understanding. Thank you, -Strawberryhouse] Aeconia Online. A MMORPG game released this year gained immense popularity straight after its release. It was a VR game with incredible graphics and had mastered the ability to make the user feel like it was reality itself. This was the reason why shortly, a year after its release, it became the current world's most popular game. Alexander Mark, a 1st year University student, finally saved enough money to buy the VR Pods which allowed him to finally play the game—even though he was a little late. Once he loaded in, he let out his words of joy. "Finally. I'm able to play this game. After hours of working part-time jobs.." He began to play, that was until, only a week after.. 「 Congratulations Host 」 "Huh?" 「 The One Who Controls The Clouds interested in forming a contract with you 」 "A contract? No-" 「 The host does not have a choice 」 「 Forming Contract... 」 "W-wait, what??" And, so, Alexander began his march. Or was it a higher beings march? Towards getting stronger as a lightning spearman. As a... Disciple Of Thunder. --- Warning: Writing is not full-time so updates won't have many chapters. --- Why ready my novel? It's simple: - I have a unique take on the VRMMORPG genre (unlike most novels, read more to see what I mean) - There is NO leveling system - A lot of mystery veiled about the [One Who Controls The Clouds] --- Word count: 1000+ words per chapter Update stability: 1chs/week (But extra chapters will be releasef based on milestones.) I know that this is too much but I'm struggling to balance both my hobbies, exams and social time with writing more chapters. But I will 100% be consistent with my update stability. --- Milestones. Collections: 10 - Extra 100 words 25 - Extra 250 words 50 - Bonus Chapter 100 - Bonus Chapter (+2) 125 - Bonus Chapter (+1) 150 - Bonus Chapter (+1) 175 - Bonus Chapter (+1) 200 - Bonus Chapter (+2) Let's try and hit 200 collections. Just add this book to your library! Power stones: 50 - Extra Chapter 100 - Extra 2 Chapters 150 - Extra 2 Chapters (what am I doing to myself? T_T) If we hit 200 Power stones, then I'll release a stockpile worth of chapters! Coffee will be my best friend!!

Strawberryhouse · เกม
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Contract To Mr Reign

I was going to die on the stairs. Before I could actually feel the other steps of the stairs, I felt hands wrapped themselves around my waist. My eyes were closed. Why do we close our eyes when there were some dangers? That was stupid. As if with closed eyes, we weren't going to feel any pain. "Fuck. Are you okay?" I opened my eyes quickly when I heard this deep sexy voice. My eyes widened at the sexy piece of human standing in front of me. No human had the right to be that sexy. "God?" I asked. When he rose one of his perfect eyebrows in confusion, I realized how stupid I sounded. His perfect face was everything. His well trimmed beard made him look so handsome. His green eyes was hypnotizing. As his body was pressed against mine, I could feel how muscular he was. He helped up stand up and roughly let go of me. His eyes trailed to the floor. I followed his eyes to see a cigarette on the floor. "I'm sorry?" I more like questioned. Was I supposed to apologize for the wasted cigarette which was going to ruin his health? "Thank you" I said when I decided to look at him again. He was already staring at me. He was wearing a black suit. His hair was perfectly fixed. I wonder how would he look if his hair was messy and he was wearing a Jean. Noticing that he was not going to say anything else, I stared at the stairs. "I'm going to go" I simply said and walked down the stairs carefully. When I was on the grass, I gently lifted my dress so that it wouldn't be ruined and walked bare feet on the grass. I turned my head slightly to look at the man, who seemed to be observing me. He was still on the stairs, his eyes on me. He was model worthy. He did seem to the snobby type of man. I quickly turned around to face the woods. That man could take the breath away just by his looks.

Daoistg1Bbnm · สมัยใหม่
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A Slow And Painful Death To My Husband

“If He Can Cheat, Two Can Play That Game” Camelia knew nothing but revenge when she was reborn. A young girl madly in love with her knight, Michael. Many would shun their relationship but Camelia was lucky to have kind parents. The marques not only accepted their love but also made the orphan boy Earl in his territory. Everything was like a dream until it broke. With blood dripping from the dagger, Michael sauntered towards Camelia and slit her throat. His lover, Katherine, laughing and enjoying the scene. “I vow to take revenge for the death of my family. Even if I have to haunt you as a ghost, I am ready to wander for eternity. I will come... To take revenge.” Her eyes closed with burning desire. But when she opened them again, she was back to their honeymoon. Now.. will she slit his throat that instant or... Burn him with her slow revenge? Excerpt: The cold eyes of man crawled over her skin like a reptile coiling her into its tight grip, but she stared back firmly, “So, you are telling me you will return the land to my family if I help you in ruining your husband. The one you had a love marriage with?” a hint of mockery in his perfectly chiseled face when she grimaced. “I will give you my land, Damien. I am sure you can not use the word return here. But yes, as long as you will help me in taking my revenge. I will give you everything I have." So what if he was a devil, she was ready to sell her soul for revenge. “Hmm, you said everything.” His lips twisted into a nefarious smile. “Eek!” Ethan, his aid covered his lips as he could already imagine a dagger in the hands of his master. ‘How could you smile like that when you were planning to kill this woman before she knocked on the door.’

Ada_5253 · แฟนตาซี
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TyrantTron335
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Good man keep it up don't drop it. There not so many people who writes about Doomsday fanfic man do you know strong he is he kill the superman. if I want to go DC universe as villain then I will choose Doomsday. Man I love his power & look that awesome. Please Please don't drop it 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

god_of_time
god_of_timeLv2god_of_time

4.6 for now I want to see where this is going and I expect the mc to show his power and not hide them like every mc from isekai anime. ...

The_Sheep
The_SheepLv2The_Sheep

I don't know if the author is just writing for the sake of writing because I find the idea interesting, but I'll give my honest opinion here. I will list what I thought was good and what I thought was bad. The author's idea of ​​putting Doomsday in MHA is cool and creative and the grammar is good. These are the good points. The negative points is that the Author neglects reality a bit, as the MC goes out killing villains at night, and makes sure he never has eyewitnesses, cameras etc that could have caught him, which honestly, surely would, not to mention that there are heroes like the academy director who is super smart, and the hero who can see into the future, these two could very easily figure out who the MC is because of how sloppy he is when hunting villains. The author's point is probably to put the MC to fight, but he could have done it in a much better and original way, because going out at night to fight villains has in many MHA fan-fics. Second negative point, there's a lot of miss information about the world background and about the character personality/histor.y We don't know the MC's personality, what he was like or what he is really like, he goes out to kill villains like he's going out for hot dogs, no explanation on how he can do it without feeling guilt or remorse, we don't know his past and nothing about what he was/is and how that might have influenced in his new life choices, And there are also some TAGS missing in the fan-fic, like Romance, and MHA AU, because the world he's in is an AU, it's important to put that, because the author simply decided to put Momo and the MC in the same school as Bakugou and Midoriya , and without the AU Tag, it just left readers confused, because if it weren't for AU, Momo and probably the MC would go to the rich school that Momo attended in the original timeline. Basically, the idea is interesting, but the author seems to be too focused on just developing the story and has forgotten a lot of important details, or he just doesn't care, which is normal when writing a fan-fic.

JOKER_JAY
JOKER_JAYLv4JOKER_JAY

Good story so far and I'm interested in how this story will turn out, but I don't want Mc to look doomsday. if you're going to have him look him then I have designed of doomsday I kinda like.

Silver_Epsilon
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azertyuiop
azertyuiopLv4azertyuiop

before i start i have few questions.will the mc hide his strength for some bs reasons and is the mc good or evil or neutral and finally will there be any romance .

Axenzzx
AxenzzxLv13Axenzzx

Great story so far, good grammar, and an original concept when it comes to the powers chosen. Only thing I would change is the spacing bewteen sentences, dont know if it’s just me but when you put a ton of sentences together to form these long paragraphs, I tend to get easily distracted and not very interested in reading all of what’s there. Maybe put 2-4 sentences together then space them out, overall great story.

AnonZi
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I like the writing, but the story (in my opinion) is set up so that the story will be quite short. I'll of course change that rating if this ever becomes multiverss but I can't really look into the future. character design is nice, and I like how hes trating humans a bit like the actual dday. there hasn't really been much background so far but, well... there's only 3 chapters so yeah. it's a 4.4-4.6 for me

Dissapointed_One
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It's dropped isn't it? Of course it is. THIS SITE IS GARBAGE THIS SITE IS GARBAGE THIS SITE IS GARBAGE THIS SITE IS GARBAGE THIS SITE IS GARBAGE

KeiJu
KeiJuนักเขียนKeiJu

I just wanted to personally give myself a rating now that really reflects my opinion, this won't go to in depth but I'll try to cover the review points. Writing Quality: I personally think that I've done pretty well so far grammatically. I haven't seen any major mistakes being pointed out so far and I started dividing the paragraphs so that it's better to read. So yeah I'd give myself a 5/5 there. Stability of Updates: I try to upload once every week and I think the last update is the first time I messed that up and that was due to medical reasons, so I'd say 5/5 is fitting there aswell. Story Development: This is very opinionated but I'd say that a 4/5 fits it. I think that I haven't created any plot holes so far and the timeline is progressing pretty well in my opinion. Character Design: I honestly feel pretty good about the mc's character developement, and I do try to show any changes in his personality or life in general. World Background: This is honestly a 3/5 max... I haven't really done with the world's backround, kinda just expecting that everyone knows mha but I'll try to show some societal aspects from now on. Like the discrimination and such. Anyways yeah that's it. I think 4.4 fits it ok, while I did wish for it to be better... I'll do another review after the 20th chapter or so where I'll hopefully get World Backround to a 4/5 at least. Thanks for reading :)

Madara1137
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HolyMantle
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Katie thoughts fully lavished praise upon Barry’s performance during our meetings last night. While he was giving a presentation on Nathaniel’s Learning To Dubstep, the teen dismissed parental authority by sneezing four unique, unfiltered moments of three-note asterisk*. Carson’s Welsh strawseral robots gasp the Klein Potion we scholars laid waste to. Then yeah, drugs did Annie had a rough go of it during Fishervalley Airhart award proper. She discovered an unreachable oaklock while unraveling a three-legged cane, knight snorting ■cycles carried twelve-legged rosewater animatronic beasts unlit by division and delicately cooing, ‘Just me, how it is, disorganized and desperately speed-dating scoundrels amongst senseless bo-robots.’ But (a manic sparrow lost his droppings and died filling Harvard auditorium with peacefully sleeping robots) shadow lighting exceptions abound. Hyde Coyote Tableaux Temper Quad.

Joao_Silva_0541
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Shadow1609
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please continoue i have enjoyed it very much[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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