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Abyssal Firmament

นักเขียน: Risks
Fantasy
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What is Abyssal Firmament

อ่านนิยาย Abyssal Firmament โดย ผู้เขียน Risks ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Jin was a mortal reincarnated into a cultivation world.He made a name for himself and became a person while far from reaching the peak was a person feared by angels, devils, and the fallen.But when he...

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Jin was a mortal reincarnated into a cultivation world. He made a name for himself and became a person while far from reaching the peak was a person feared by angels, devils, and the fallen. But when he came across a powerful treasure in the abyss he was ambushed and killed. When he thought it was over he was reincarnated into a new world, in a new era with his memories and the treasure he was killed for. Join his journey as he rises above all and reigns supreme. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is my first try at creating a novel. After reading so much, I decided I wanted to make my own. I would appreciate some advice and tips to improve as I am a newbie writer. The cover picture is not mine if wanted to be taken down, let me know. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: The following story is purely fictional and the plot is not to be associated with actual historical or religious records. All characters and plots in this book are totally fictional. There is no intentional disrespect shown to any community. Please be understanding towards the plot and read it as fictional. This story is purely created for the readers’ entertainment purposes.

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Naegi's Ultimate Fun-club

Fun-club. Pretty simple word isn’t it? It is usually referred to organized group of people who all admire the same person or thing. For instant example a famous singer or pretty popular person. But our main character can hardly be called popular or famous. The only good traits he posses are his kindness, life saving smile, his luck and his ability to see hope in things which are usually called hopeless. Naegi Makoto was hardly a strong person…nor did he have any outstanding abilities…the only ability he had... was luck and even that so called luck was often bad luck for him. But for some odd reason this guy with brown hair and innocent look of a carefree child had a fun club. Yes,a whole fun club which consisted only of females. Of course he wasn’t nor would he ever be aware of this so called Fun club but still the fact remained the same…he had it. Even tho he called himself nothing special in fact he was. His kindness,his braveness and his pure heart full of hope was one of the triggers of excessive and obsessive female behavior. Whenever someone needs help…he helps them. Whenever someone is hurt…he tries to minimize the pain as far as he can. Whenever someone is sad…he tries his best to cheer them. This is the well known Makoto Naegi,he might be called and referred as an Ultimate Luckster or Ultimate Hope but in the back, surprisingly unknown to himself, he is called with a bit funny and unsettling nickname ‘Ultimate Chick Magnet’ or ‘Ultimate womanizer’ Thus this story will tell us about pure and kind guy Makoto Naegi and…His secret Fun Club full of girls trying to get his attention.

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Journey Through The Universe

«To get through the hardest journey we need to take only one step at a time. The key is, we must keep stepping.« ¶•¶•¶•¶ Highest ranking: 1 in self-management on Wattpad. ••• Started: 27-March-2019 Ended: God knows when. ••• Believers are Readers. Readers are Leaders. Believe that you can change by reading. Read because you're capable of leading. ••• In a world, where the word unfair can barely describe it I believe it's the duty of who can guide others who are yet to face these obstacles of the universe and to go through the journey of it to help them. In order to help you, a team of 10 members is working to present the best content and give you advice through painful, happy, nostalgic, euphoric, and sad experiences I and they were forced to learn the hard way. But guess what? You're not. You can simply click on this to learn things we've spent years living through and discovered how to survive them. While you, my pal you got the chance to survive them by a few minutes read. Man, today's technology is amazeballs. Read with heart and mind open. Join us with each and every single obstacle we went through. You can go on laughing your ass off at us but believe, it wasn't funny while we lived it. You can go through the embarrassing experience of school transferring, stage acting, bullies, self-love, food disorder, goals, and how to be productive. There are two sides of your brain. The emotional one the limbic system. And the logical which is the prefrontal cortex. In almost, 95% of your brains the limbic system wins by dragging you to read the other fanfictions, romantic novels, mysterious murders, hopeless love, teen fiction, and the list never ends. 95% percent of who's reading this will ignore it. However, to the rest of you the %5 who fought off their limbic system and went on into this book because they seek to change, you my friend deserve the hats to be raised for you. Now, to build stronger relationships with the readers we wanted to make a bond. You are free to reach out to me by sending a pm to my Wattpad account which is @LuLu_2004. You can share any experience you wish and we'll talk about it in our book. You need someone to talk to? The team is a message away. Tighten your seatbelts, this will be a bumpy ride.

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Bhar_Yo
Bhar_YoLv2Bhar_Yo

I know I'm shameless, but in this case, I'm not. It is only shameless when it is a lie, whereas this is not. so, when I say this book is going places, I mean it. The writing quality: Topnotch, and I'm certain it will continue to get better. World building: Come on, you can't find any better than this out there. Character development: One of the absolute most promising character I have read lately. Overall, this is by far one of the best novel on this site.

CJSB_2005
CJSB_2005Lv4CJSB_2005

Good story with lots of potential, right now there is only 17 chapters but it is still good. Hopefully once there is about 100 chapters we can see the story shine

Pedro_Sousa
Pedro_SousaLv15Pedro_Sousa

I think it’s past time for me to make a review for this masterpiece. Pretty much this novel with a lot of characters with a deep background, with their own stories. And even thought the cast seems to be big author is managing to give a life to each of the characters, including the heroines and villains. Something that many authors fails to do with a way smaller cast. Just for this he gets 5 star from me. Don’t expect pure and good characters but also don’t expect bunch of cold hearted monsters. Everyone has their own flaws and their own bottomlines which gives more sense of realism. If you guys want to read a story with hot women joining the harem, baddass mc, and a serious plot give this a try.

Risks
RisksนักเขียนRisks

Shameless Author Review LOL I am a new author writing my first novel. Please give it a chance and let me know what you think of it. Leave your power stones here and I will gladly pick them up for you lol. Also, be sure to leave your reviews and comments if you have any suggestions or anything to say about my story.

Trey_Caraballo_6595
Trey_Caraballo_6595Lv14Trey_Caraballo_6595

I really like hope you keep up the good work

LeviathanEnvy
LeviathanEnvyLv14LeviathanEnvy

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Bookish_mind
Bookish_mindLv1Bookish_mind

What a great plot, totally in love with this one even the characters are amazing. I will recommend this to everyone, This book really has great potential and I am sure the upcoming chapters will get even more interesting, keep it up your story is awesome 💖💖💖💖

BeckyBamaGirl1221
BeckyBamaGirl1221Lv3BeckyBamaGirl1221

Even as tired as I was, I forced myself to read all the way through this. I liked it. It's a interesting story. I like Hakari. Good job on portraying the characters.

S3ntinel
S3ntinelLv15S3ntinel

Good novel Nfnfnfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfnfkfnfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkkffkfkfkkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfklflflflf

Bilboworthy2007
Bilboworthy2007Lv3Bilboworthy2007

I've only read the first few chapters and it is quite clear you have taken some inspiration from 'monarch of darkness', which I did find as quite and amazing novel, so I am hoping that this novel will be a top class novel MOA

MrMike
MrMikeLv5MrMike

Overall I can say that it's well written and the Dao aspect is something I find really intriguing the only thing that takes me out of the story would be the amount of vulgarity, I'm not saying that it doesn't have it's place especially for a character that has it as a part of their personality but it almost seems like it's non stop every few sentences from most of the characters so far(I've reached chapter 28) which really threw me out of my immersion of the story itself.

TheTrickster12
TheTrickster12Lv14TheTrickster12

I have a couple of complaints and critiques, first of all why did you think it'd be a good idea to add a "3 wishes" sort of thing to your story? not only does it serve to lessen our impression of power of the characters where they could instantaneously just wish for power and boom suddenly they're able to destroy worlds with a single punch, just avoid "3 wishes and gacha and even log in type of plots" the authors of those types of novels usually do not have the imagination to think of anything better than junk food novels. and secondly I can't stress this enough STOP USING "Modern Words" such as simp, beta male and whatnot honestly just ruins the flow of the story it's not funny nor is it fun to read, It's just an eyesore whenever you read them.

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