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A Favor to Old Friends (ASOIAF/GOT)

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What is A Favor to Old Friends (ASOIAF/GOT)

อ่านนิยาย A Favor to Old Friends (ASOIAF/GOT) โดย ผู้เขียน Raat_Ki_Rani ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Magic and Death came to me and asked a favor. Bring back balance to a world. Bring back magic and fee the dead who are being forced to rise again. I've never been one to abandon my friends in need. No...

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Magic and Death came to me and asked a favor. Bring back balance to a world. Bring back magic and fee the dead who are being forced to rise again. I've never been one to abandon my friends in need. Now, I've got to feed some big dragons, dodge war from around every corner, and enemies willing to slaughter thousands. It's an ugly chair, too, what is wrong with this place?

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Prologue   The little boy of eleven heard a cry from the woods that tugged at his heartstrings. And as it wailed, it was like a siren’s call as it drew him toward it, unconscious to the fact that he was walking deeper into the woods. long was the father forgotten as he trailed behind his son, who seemed to be deaf to the world when he kept walking as if in a trance. He found himself alarmed by his son’s state, however rather than to shake his son out of the spell he seemed to be under, he figured he might as well investigate and see just who it was that aimed to hurt his heir. And so he silently walked keeping a look out for any danger that might pounce out of nowhere. However, the awaited danger never came, the mere notion of it crushed when the wailing of a baby reached his own ears. They were three feet far before they reached the wrapped up bundle that wept and he watched as his son carefully picked up the baby that looked no older than four months. What surprised him was that the baby quietened as soon as it laid cradled in the arms of his son. Young Maximus finally blinked with the silence and looked at the baby within his arms, only for his heart to lurch when it opened its eyes and stared right back into his. She is beautiful, he thought, her silver pools shone from shed tears that seemed to have halted their fall the minute she had been pacified by the calming beat of his heart. His heart bloomed then when she gave him a toothless smile only to let out a squeaky sound as if to claim him as he would when he muttered. “Mine, all mine" the words were breathy through his lips, and he heard a gasp from behind him, only then did Maximus become aware of his father. “What do you mean son?” he questioned and the son merely smiled and said “She’s my mate, Aurelius just said so” referring to his wolf that lay down wagging its tail in happiness in the back of his mind. He may have been only eleven, however, he had already shifted at the young age of ten, where as normal werewolf pups turned at sixteen. Then again, his father found that he understood, after all he was merely his adoptive father, and with Maximus’ history, it made it easy to understand. Therefore, he didn’t doubt when the young boy stated that the human baby in his hands was his mate. What he wondered, however, was why a parent would simply abandon their baby when it was even yet to walk.  

Conie_Reigh · แฟนตาซี
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A high schooler on therapy runs into a campus bad boy...... It all started with him sneaking into her room through her window in the middle of the night. Atlas, a horny 24 year old handsome douchebag taught the naive Adora his own kind of pleasure. Things went as far as Adora running away from home to stay at his condo. Both messed up by their families, Adora thought he was her knight and shining armor....but was he? Atlas charmed all damsels in college to his den, tasting the shallow and deep waters as he often called it. Will Adora wake up from her dream and realize it was never about her but what was between her thighs?? GIST "I sure don't have that much strength to drive you out of my room..." "But have the strength to moan when I get in between your thighs, right? Oh Kiddo, you want this. Drop the act and spread your legs for me." He lifted my chin up. "Atlas we can't...." He sealed my mouth with his own, munching my lips rather hard and rough and before I could process the whole thing, he was pulling away leaving me gasping for air. "Don't spoil the fun, be obedient and show me what momma gave you. Your body keeps on betraying you, your anxiety, your haggard breath... it's all evident kiddo. You want me as much as I want you." He pinned me to the wall and raised my hands above my head. "Let me in, you'll never regret it...i promise. Let me show you how it feels when your core drips honey, throbbing hard for my manhood. The pleasure, the desire to burrow your hands in my hair as I pound into you...I want you to feel it."

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The plot is amazing!The story e tirely dependent on the concept of Magic bringing balance to the world of ASOIAFHope you continue working on this one

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The concept is alright but the writing quality, story dev and character design leave a bit to be desired... The MC Is Lunarya Stark. Latin name, which feels out of setting. MC has duo toned hair, and is the younger twin to Lyanna Stark. MC has the mindset of a teenage girl with all the drama that entails as a when shes not yet in her teens unless the author changed the ages. The story itself is told with new facts being habhazardly inserted. One moment mc is doing one thing, the next apparently she was doing another thing and the initial thing turns out to be a by product. The who, what, when and where are not very clear in this story. The formating could also do with a touch up. spme paragraphs are unpleasantly long when reading this on a smartphone. Pov's are camouflaged as random scene breaks. Example: XXXXXXXRIKARDXXXXXXX Thats illegible as all hell. I didnt even notice that was a POV indicator at first. All in all tough, its minor things that can be easily edited should the author wish to enhance the reading experience. It would be fairly simple to provide a good reading experience if the author simply mimicked the formatting of the most popular WN to the authors liking on here. Genre wise? I would peg this as a solid Gen Z mindset Teengirl Drama.

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