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A Collection of Criticism

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What is A Collection of Criticism

อ่านนิยาย A Collection of Criticism โดย ผู้เขียน WebNovelSins ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.This book's creation was for the purpose of proofreading and critiquing other people's novels on Webnovel.comThrough this book, I'll be indirectly showcasing several books as I go in-depth with each c...

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This book's creation was for the purpose of proofreading and critiquing other people's novels on Webnovel.com Through this book, I'll be indirectly showcasing several books as I go in-depth with each chapter pointing out any inconsistencies, basic spelling/grammar errors and typos, and anything that doesn't make sense. I already predict that the comment section will probably get filled with active discussion over these books. Note, if you came here for a novel, tough luck. There is no novel, this is only for editing/proofreading/revisions/critique. Though if you were looking for something to read and some of these reviews were worth it, then good for you. :D

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Oshi No Ko: Duet of Destinies

Orphanage walls whispered loneliness, but in Akira Ueno's heart burned a hunger for the spotlight. His voice, his moves were his only weapons against a world that saw him as invisible. Talent shows and underground gigs became his battlefields, fueled by dreams of escape and a desperate need to be seen. Whispers of record labels and fame swirled, a tantalizing glimmer just beyond his grasp. But fate took a cruel turn. A blinding flash, a truck, then darkness. Yet, a warm voice whispers a second chance, a new world. Transmigrated into the world of Oshi no Ko, Akira now holds the keys to potential stardom. Can he navigate this new path, and with a certain rising idol, discover how to love and be true to themselves? ====== Some more information before you hop into the fic: This book is very much inspired by the movie Yesterday and a fanfic I read: The Betrayed Hero and the Idol, but I want to keep the supernatural stuff to a minimum. Also, Akira will be using songs from this world as they don't exist in the world of Oshi No Ko. Akira is a performer, not a songwriter and the only one who would know the songs are not his is him. For full transparency I write the novel myself and use AI to proofread and be an editor for my work. I am more familiar with pop and rnb music so that is what I will be using most likely Since the timeline in OnK is confusing, I am going to go ahead and make my own: Ai Birthday: Jan 25, 2002 Akira Birthday: June 11, 2002 Aqua and Ruby birthday: April 28, 2018 Date when Akira Transmigrates: October 3, 2019

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Hello, shameless review by the author has arrived! Writing Quality is 3/5, mainly because there's no original content here despite okay grammar/spelling/etc. Stability of Updates will be also 3/5 mainly because I'm a busy human being who puts in 60 hours of work a week to feed their family. Story Development is OBVIOUSLY a 1/5. There's no story here. Character Design is ALSO a 1/5. What character? World Background... You guessed it. 1/5. Wit/Humour/Sarcasm/Harsh Truths: 3/5.

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