A Bored Lich
"Screw magic, I want to learn how to do cool flips and stuff." Magic is awesome, until you've studied it for centuries. Doevm reincarnates into a human to experience the path of a fighter to its fullest and swears not to rely on magic. There is only one problem, a goddess stands in his way. She pits him against both the hero and the villain for all of eternity. How will he escape this, with magic or his fists? Maybe both? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------(Sorry about the spacing. Webnovel doesn't let me use enter) Winner of contest #110. I upload three chapters a week. Each chapter has word count around 1000+.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Link to my discord: https://discord.gg/tHaceja ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------While I am an experienced writer, I do make mistakes. Don't be afraid to say you don't understand something or point out an error in grammar. I read all comments. There are naturally some things I won't say. For example, if some says there's an inconsistency and I don't address it, it's probably there for a reason.
Deal
Author's note: With this one FINAL experiment (for the in-between chapters), I'm trying to be a little more on the nose with dialogue, character, and narrative. Please let me know if it's too simple or you like things less vague. You don't even have to give me an explanation, just if it is or isn't. Regardless, in the future I'll still shift between vague and simple depending on the point in the story. I just want to know how simple is too simple. For example if I said: "Thomas felt angered that Doevm said he was naïve. He wondered why Doevm would say that. He concluded it was because blah blah blah." I appreciate everything my community has contributed to my growth as a writer and this is the last thing I'll pressure you guys on for a while. Now back to the story…
"Human, monster, you talk as if those are two different things," Shay said.