Pete Ink

9/10 but ill give u 5 stars im looking foward to the future of the space travel the character desings arent really described but this takes place in the real world ig so its no big deal

Not bad The grammar is a bit weird at times but its fluid enough nothing special though. The updates are fair once a day is pretty valid. Story dev. is amazing not gonna lie the pacing is soo fast and it moves foward soo well but not in a way where you think they are moving too fast lol. Character design is lacking because you havent really described their looks World background so far is a 9/10