A few improvements...

The next morning, Eldrin quietly waited outside the inn as he sat in a nearby eatery and ordered some breakfast. However, despite waiting for an hour and a half, the person he was looking for did not look like she was going to walk out anytime soon.

"Arrogant brat!" Eldrin grumbled as he decided to head upstairs personally and check what the delay was.

As soon as he arrived at the first floor, he saw a hooded figure standing in the corridor. "You are still here? I know I said beauty is important but you cannot take all day to get ready. You-"

Eldrin stopped his rant, noticing something weird. When he looked closer he saw that the elven girl standing in front of him still possessed the same figure as before.

"Impossible! How are you still flat-chested?"

Elira snapped to look at him, glaring in anger. "I am not flat-chested!"