Dakota_Morrison: I'm just saying it now, even if there are problems that should lower the amount of stars, I don't see them to the point of it being important. so I will just put full marks so I can give you five stars. That is how much I enjoy this story. I have read quite a few overlord fanfiction, yet 90% of them are so similar that it kinda gets boring and repetitive. Yours actually put a spin on it that made me really enjoy it, and look forward to seeing more. Plus you are starting off by having the plot play out like it should, by actually thinking of ways to further it with less complications, while focusing on the MC. And you are doing it by world building early on. Plus you are adding originality to it, by including the butterfly effect in small ways. Then you add on that the MC is changing things by doing what he is doing, in small doses and at appropriate times. That way you can introduce these things into the story, without overwhelming the readers with all the possible dangers that could happen. This way we can enjoy the small things the story brings, instead of being fixated on the major threat. Plus this way we can also enjoy any humor that is there, instead of screaming that the mc should be more worried, focused, blah blah blah etc etc. Thank you.
