nighthawk

Finished volume I... Loved the way the author ended the story to let klein progress in the story. As without letting his family go or without leaving the church /nighthawk, it would have been difficult to get to sequence 7 as it is being suppressed by them. Also having expectations about Sherlock Moriarty... 😁

my thoughts after 343th chapter of this novel (don't look at the score above, the real one (more accurate) starring is below in the review): Translation: well done piece of work -> 5* Updates: as gt updates kinda died, I've migrated here ... and'll stay here cause of machine gun updates -> 5,5* Story: well thought story, keeps me interested in what'll happen in the next chapter, but there's one major bad thing - I've seen that first arc throws big chunk of people away from this novel -> 4* Characters: nothing special, their design live up to my level of expectations, but I'd be glad to see some of them more often (like f.e. it'd be nice if: before Mo Fan comes back from where he's right now, mrs Tanguye (or eventually Nighthawk) would come to meet with him to discuss current situation) -> 4,5* World: not overcomplicated, everything in the world explained understandably - how it should be done -> 6* Conclussion: solid 5*

Honestly, I am pleasantly surprised by this fanfic since there are not a lot of good LotM fanfics on this website, or anywhere, to be real. This one though is pretty good and I have been reading since the earlier chapters. For those wanting to know what's happening: we follow the plot pretty closely for now, since Angel (our MFC) is a Nighthawk of Tingen City, but the author manages to add little details that flesh out the story, making it so that fans of LotM won't be bored. And like the original, there are still very much mysteries, like the reincarnation of Angel, because she doesn't seem to have a connection to the Grey Fog. Or even mysteries about what world she came from, because there is obviously some magic or fantasy there, showcased by the gods present there or the bullets she recreated upon arriving in this new world. Overall a pretty good read, thanks to the author and keep going!

I just finished reading Amon, I’m Here to Steal Your Godhood, and I’m genuinely captivated by how you’ve expanded the Lord of the Mysteries universe. Kenley White’s journey—starting as a Nighthawk under Evernight’s design and evolving into a Beyonder with the “Thief” potion feels like a slow descent into something vast, eerie, and divine. The way he shadows Klein, threading through conspiracies and unraveling mysteries from Tingen to Backlund, gives the story this haunting, cinematic rhythm. I’m a commissioned comic artist who specializes in adapting emotionally rich web fiction, and this story instantly sparked visual ideas. The interlocking gears in Kenley’s eye, the reversal of time, and the final confrontation with Amon inside Source Castle it’s all so visually evocative. If you ever consider a comic adaptation, I’d love to explore the possibility of working together to bring this mythic arc to life. You can reach me at [email protected], or find me on Instagram (@lunaartsoul), Twitter/X (@lunaartsoul), or Discord (lunapuresoul). I’d be thrilled to hear what inspired this divine heist and how you see Kenley’s fate unfolding.