the fate of the fallen warrior
Tayar is currently embroiled in a brutal war. The races of light are on the verge of exterminating the races of the fallen. Led by humans with fearsome powers from another world, their victory becomes more and more assured with every passing battle. But when the last member of a now extinct race of fallen suddenly appears, the entire world will be turned upon it's head.
Good novel author if you continue like this your novel can become one of the best novels in this platform. I have some suggestions for you: - According to my analysis you chose a devouring fallen angel at the beginning because of the weakness of the MC so you can continue this momentum by making the second fallen angel made for the cultivation of the body like the true power dao of from the novel fate destroying emperor and it will be more interesting if there are three paths for cultivation in your novel like: soul path, energy path, body path and body cells are the dantians of body path cultivators but this path is difficult so few people take it but our MC with the fallen angel of devoration does not have this problem. - the third fallen angel can allow the MC to cultivate his dao heart which is very important for cultivation and therefore the first three angels must allow him to have a solid foundation. - the fourth fallen angel can allow the MC to control the akashic records which governs knowledge and all things related to knowledge, thus making him become truly OP because he will know himself, will know his enemies (like sons of destinies). - the fifth fallen angel can allow the MC to become immortal or eternal like the eternal emperors of the novel fate desrroying emperor. - Finally, after laying the foundations for a good base, the other fallen angels can have powers such as fate law manipulation which allows you to control absolutely everything and anything (even laws) or creation law manipulation which allows you to create absolutely everything or anything (even laws) or destruction law manipulation which allows you to destroy absolutely everything or anything (even laws).
This is extraordinary. The plot of the story made me flutter. Even a crow was confused by that person. This story is good, wrapped in easy-to-understand words. Chapter one will tell about a fallen warrior, struck by lightning amid corpses. It already lets you know that this story is interesting to read.
I like the Harry Potter x Fate x LOL crossover. the blend of the three is very interesting. The story with its mild changes, that are slow but very needed to improve Harry into the warrior mage needed to survive the Two Lords of the Light and Dark and the Corrupt government. Its easy to read and not many grammar issues.
the MC is pretty spunky and the ML has already fallen, he sealed his fate when he said it was love at first sight. even though it does follow the typical cliches, the couple's personality and how she harps over the age gap is pretty funny. hope this continues.
With its captivating story of adventure and discovery, Fate Weaver: Temporal Warrior takes readers on a journey that spans across the universe. The main protagonist, Cyrus, is a relatable and likable character, and his transformation from a humble village boy to a powerful temporal warrior is truly inspiring. The concept of the ancient race and their advanced technology is intriguing and adds an extra layer of depth to the story. The balance of intense battles and humor keeps the readers engaged from start to finish. Fate Weaver: Temporal Warrior is a thrilling saga that will leave readers wanting more, and is definitely worth the read for anyone who loves a good sci-fi adventure.