the red sun

Red sun Red sun over paradise Red sun Red sun over paradise Golden rays of the glorious sunshine Setting down, such a blood-red light Now the animals slowly retreat To the shadows – out of sight Arid breeze blows across the mountains Giving flight to the birds of prey In the distance machines come To transform Eden – day by day Only love is with us now Something warm and pure Find the peace within ourselves / Violence breeds within ourselves* No need for a cure When the wind is slow And the fire’s hot The vulture waits to see what rots Oh how pretty All the scenery This is nature’s sacrifice When the air blows through With a brisk attack The reptile tail ripped from its back When the sun sets We will not forget the Red sun over paradise Red sun

Love this novel. Good story with a unique plot. It adds a twist to the apocalypse genre of novels. The characters aren’t boring to read and that’s all. Now enjoy my poem. Roses are red. Violets are blue. Clovers are green. White clouds are—white. And the sun—it’s beautiful. Oh I messed up. And the sun—it’s yellow. Orange. Red. What color is the sun? FUUUUCCCCCKKKK

The logic of this novel is a total mess! It says that the sun died because of the because of humans. But how could the humans living on 'earth' affect the sun in any way?? At most humans can cause the destruction of planet Earth but not the sun. There are 7 main stages in the life cycle of a star. The final stages consist of Red giant phase and supernova. At the red Giant phase the sun becomes 100 to 1000 times bigger than the original size. So tell me now, can the Earth possibly exist when the sun died? Not only that, the writing needs some improvement. The plot seems nice without all those plot holes.

I am thoroughly enjoying this novel, it's an interesting transmigration world building novel. The red sun provides a great sense of urgency and I'm interested to see what role the satellite will play in the future.