Young Master Li's Soft and Cute Wife
[1v1: The male lead is cold, the female lead is soft, cute, and black-bellied]
Young Master Li Chu of the Li family picked up a soft and cute amnesiac girl, Su He, and held it in his hand to dote on. The little girl was soft and cute, and she was both sweet and salty. She didn't know anything after asking, only knowing that her name was Su He.
"Brother Li, can you not go to the cocktail party tonight? Xiao He is afraid of being alone at home." There was an assassination at the cocktail party that night, and Li Chu successfully avoided danger.
"Brother Li, how about you invest in this company? They are so pitiful." A few days later, the company turned the money around, and Li Chu made a huge profit.
" Brother Li, Xiao He wants to eat ice cream. Can you buy it for me?"
Li Chu came back with the ice cream and looked at her cute little cutie, scolding the two men in suits coldly.
"Brother Li, I…"
Su He's little secret identity was exposed bit by bit. It was amazing and unbelievable.
"Little fool, you hid it so well, huh?"
Li Chu gently tapped Su He's nose with his finger.
Su He was a big shot who had hidden her identity. In order to repay Li Chu for inadvertently saving her life, she pretended to lose her memory and let Li Chu take her home. This allowed Li Chu to avoid many dangers. As the two of them got along, sparks gradually flew.
[Sweet.]
The story concept is good and got my interest. The first chapter (Prologue) was short enough it could have been put together with the second chapter. There were a few places where the dialogue was confusing, the last chapter was missing a lot of punctuations. My last suggestion would be to add more detail, take your time with each chapter. You’re doing good.