a dragon's wish
What makes dragons strong? It's not their power or magic, but their mind. Arrogance, greed, Iron Will, and the lack of human restraints. What would happen if you threw such a creature into human society? Would they understand humans? What does love even mean to them? This is the situation that our MC, Arad Orion found himself in. A newborn dragon bringing "Might make Right" to the humanoids, but why? Due to an abnormal condition, the mighty void dragons are on the brink of extinction. Their bodies have suddenly started rejecting their kind. Due to that, Arad's mother dropped his egg into a forest where he could hatch safely, leaving him with a fragment of her consciousness and informing him of the condition of their race. From that point, his goal became clear. To save their race by either finding a cure for their condition or going the second route of making more void dragons. But, sadly, nothing is ever that easy. Finding a cure is almost impossible. Arad is still practically a newborn and cannot tap into the terrifying might of his race, and his rarity makes him a prime target for mages and scholars seeking to study the dying race. Dragons are arrogant, proud, and vicious. Yet those feeling extends to those whom they love. You who touched a dragon's love, Retribution is an insult, and life is a crime. Beware as merely existing draws the dragon's wrath. Follow Arad on his journey as he grows from a naive wyrmling to a grown dragon with enough wisdom and power to stand with the strongest of the world. *** If you liked the story, please support it with power stones and comments! The story now has a Discord server. Please visit it to see character art by me and the community. https://discord.gg/CPJXDj6Adg *** You can contact me at Discord at any time Alen_Tanor#1599 And last. Please don't forget to leave a review, it really helps!
so the story's grammar is pretty good. the system was kind of interesting and the character seemed all right. that's about all the good things I can say about it. why the low rating then. well the author doesn't seem to know his Cannon very well or have done any homework and it's to the point it makes me wonder if he's even a dragon Ball fan. as most dragon Ball fans still think the wish is limited to one from shenron but that actually changed in the cell saga of dragon Ball z to three wishes. in the story he goes to Earth way before dragon Ball even starts and asks shenron for not one wish but three which he shouldn't be capable of because that was only something that became possible 2/3 through dragon Ball z. so clearly the author has not watched dragon Ball at all which precedes dragon Ball z and about 70% of dragon Ball z. because throughout most of dragon Ball series shenron had only been able to Grant one wish. also the author seems unaware the dragon balls can't be found for one year after making a wish upon them. because in this story right upon making a wish on them he goes and finds them two days later to make another set of three wishes. this break from Canon was just too much. it makes me wonder whether the authors is actually a fan of the dragon Ball series that includes dragon Ball and dragon Ball z and super/gt.