Daily Intelligence System: Don't Kill Me, Honey!
In the late years of the Daqian era, tyrants roamed freely, war erupted endlessly, and the people could not sustain their lives.
After transmigration, Chen Jie finds himself as a drunken gambler with a pair of unfortunate sisters at home.
The elder one, Su Yunjin, is his wife, and he also has a five-year-old sister-in-law, Su Yunrui.
Their family is so poor they can barely make ends meet.
Then suddenly, his beautiful wife comes smiling, bringing him a bowl of hot porridge.
"Husband, I was wrong yesterday. Please have some porridge while it's hot."
Seeing the bruises on his wife's face, Chen Jie feels something is amiss.
Ding~
[Daily Information has been updated]
[1. Yesterday, you gambled away the last three acres of good land, beat Su Yunjin while drunk, and planned to sell the five-year-old Su Yunrui, to recover your losses.]
[2. The Su sisters rely on each other. Su Yunrui is Su Yunjin's only hope.]
[3. Su Yunjin, having lost hope, traded her mother's hairpin three days ago for a pack of arsenic.]
...Arsenic!
Staring at the hot porridge brought to his lips, Chen Jie looks up at his wife, seeing the faint bruise on her face and her eyes shifting away, avoiding his gaze.
"Honey!"
"Yes?"
"You're not going to kill me, are you?!"
Tao Gong Wang · Eastern
A constructive criticism about the plot. Do not make Veda the only destined killer of the heavenly lord, it kills the tension and the struggle the character goes through to actually kill the heavenly lord, it makes the journey and the struggle feel less important as it was already written in destiny. You could maybe make multiple destined killers of the heavenly lord who have different world views and why they want to kill the heavenly lord, maybe one of them wants to kill the heavenly lord because he wants to become the next heavenly lord and veda wants to free the world now they both have the same aim of killing the heavenly lord but completely different reasons to kill him and as they both have equal potential of killing the heavenly lord it creates veda's struggle more meaningful and keeps the tension alive throughout the journey as he now is not guarenteed to kill the heavenly lord and at the same time failing to kill the heavenly lord is not an option because the other destined killer will become a more brutal, overall worse heavenly lord.