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Have you ever read a novel with such a terrible ending that you wished you could change the story and give the characters you loved the happy ending they deserved? ~~~~ I woke up as the protagonist’s younger sister in the massively popular novel Solo Player. Fated to die no matter what path I take, constantly shadowed by my ridiculously overprotective brother — the world’s strongest solo player himself — I should have been helpless. But I won’t go down that easily. I’ll train until I surpass every limit, break free from this predetermined death flag, and rewrite my own ending. All while the Constellations bombard me with sponsorships, gifts, and endless fangirling like I’m some top-tier idol streamer. …What is wrong with these cosmic weirdos?! ~~~~ Chapters are long, 1500 ~ 2000+ words. During its serialization, this novel will be available for free forever, no premium. However, you can read advanced chapters here: https://www.patreon.com/pancakeswitch Copyright 2023 PancakesWitch. All rights reserved. No part of this work may be reproduced or used in any manner without the prior written permission of the copyright owner, except for the use of brief quotations in a review. This novel is also being posted on Scribblehub and Royal Road. If you see it anywhere else, please let me know. Thank you.
I honest don’t understand what is happening most of the time because there is no quotation mark. This it hard to read and know who is talking or when thier going to do an action. When the author does put quotation mark be sure to not put a chain of quotation, when a character stop talking and another character about to talk start a new line for them.