the campers

I'll be honest, if I were reborn as Demeter's son and in the forest with lost campers and attacking monsters. I would get orange clothing, find a fake orange mustache, appear in front of them and say: "I am the Lorax and I speak for the trees." Then go Hashirama on the monsters. Just imagine what the monsters tell the others at Tartarus when they reform. The campers at Camp. 😂😂😂😂😂

Really love this novel. I love the two best friends’ dynamic and how they try to stick to the script…and fail the next minute and just went in guns blazing. Nathan wouldnt have needed to bash himself lololol. Well, speaking of Nathan I guess my only peeve is that he does not get enough screentime? I do find Brian charming but Nats has little spotlight. Nevertheless, when it does shine down on him he can be a cool guy. Overall, great novel with a hundred chapters and counting. Its worth your time, campers ヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉ

honestly the length of the chapters is very good, the problem is u either used ai or just copy pasted somethings too many times, there is a good amount of repetition, the pace is also very slow its been like 7000+ words and we still havent seen all campers, nor the story has moved on from the opening scene you could've paced it regularlywhile stretching the time between challenges, some story choices are also very questionable, like the talking system, the hazy memories are also ngl very generic im honestly suprised the mc doesnt know whats happened, his sister obviously was either murdered or died in an accident and the previous havoc blamed his inability to help or prevent anything so he trained in all things and became a neet, the choice to handicap the mc by making him dumb also doesn't help, the fact that he also has to constantly speak spanish to remind us of his heritage is very annoying, okay we get it you're spanish no need to talk spanish every minute, u can say fuck no need to make it spanish, also before making fanfics lr any story that has action u should firmly decide what your mc is gonna be, either make him op and leave it alone, or make him weak and let him progress, the whole he's got batman's template but cant think before talking doesnt make sense, honestly your mc doesn't even need a system or any template as he was a survival nut so for the competition hes golden

Well, what I can say is that this fanfic is really cool and interesting. Seeing Kakashi Hatake in the Percy Jackson universe replacing Luke is especially interesting because the version of Kakashi Hatake who replaces Luke is the Kakashi Hatake from the Boruto era. So, he's a much more experienced and wise Kakashi Hatake, and it's always cool to see him reflecting on and disagreeing with certain systems and Gods of that world. Since he was Hokage, he can see the flaws in the Camp Half-Blood system and in the Gods, so it's really cool to see him reforming and changing things at Camp Half-Blood. You can see that he really cares and doesn't want anyone to end up dead because they didn't have enough training and field experience to be able to carry out the missions. Now let's move on to a lighter and really cool part, seeing how he cares about his half-siblings. After all, in his original life, he only had his father as family, and after his father killed himself, we see that he was the only one left. After all, he and his father were the only Hatakes in Konoha, so it's nice to see how happy Kakashi is to finally have a family, that he's no longer alone, and that he now has a very large family that he wants to protect. Now let's move on to the comedy part. I have to say it's funny to see Kakashi playing pranks on others, and it's also very funny to see scenes where he's reading his high-quality books 😏 and suddenly starts giving a strange and perverted laugh. You can see that the author knew how to represent Kakashi in this world because you can see that he really resembles the original Kakashi, not only in appearance but also in personality. Now, about the fights, they are interesting and ingenious, mainly because Kakashi uses his knowledge to face his enemies. So it's always very cool to see him fight strategically and intelligently. This ends up bringing many interesting fights, especially when he starts teaching the other demigods at the camp. You can see that the fights become more strategic. Furthermore, we can see certain campers using the full potential of their gifts. Just look at the children of Aphrodite; in the original book, they are not usually interested in combat, but here they have become probably the most dangerous cabin at Camp Half-Blood, and that's very interesting to see because Kakashi showed them the terrifying potential they possessed. Of course, it wasn't just the Aphrodite cabin he helped; he also helped the others see their true potential. Well, I think I'll stop here now. If you've read all this and are interested, I recommend that if you want to know more, I recommend reading it because it's really an interesting and fun read. I highly recommend you read it; I know you won't regret it because I didn't regret it. It was truly an interesting and fun experience I had reading this fic.

Since the most recent chapter has just had the final campers arrive, I think now is as good a time as any to leave a review. I’ll start with the negatives first. Ai, you can definitely tell it’s there, but as the author posted in one of the chapters, they were using it to help bring their ideas to life and were working to make the chapters look less ai edited (I’m paraphrasing, but that’s the gist). That said, it especially comes through when he explains his nickname system or gives advice to others. Next, the way the MC is written feels a little off for me, but it’s nowhere near as bad as some other stories such as one where I’ve seen the MC trauma dump on a stranger and have the stranger reciprocate. Despite minor issues I have with how he’s written, the MC is consistent (and generally logical) in how he acts, which is a relief since he ain’t brain dead. On a more positive note, I like how the first chapters were spent on the characters arriving, and rather than brushing that time off like other fanfics, this one takes the chance to build up relationships between characters. Though I complained that his advice felt stiff, I do like how he’s giving it to characters who might need it for one reason or another, and generally giving it either so they don’t embarrass themselves on live TV or make themselves look like elimination targets. Now for a few personal things I enjoyed. First, the nicknames. Though I find his reasoning for it somewhat flat at times, I do like how the nicknames are fitting. My three favorites are Sunshine, Loco and Guru. I also like how he is increasing the competitiveness of the whole thing with his advice, even if it increases the challenge for himself. It’s simple stuff like keep some info hidden, give trust sparingly, don’t antagonize others, but hopefully it makes the alliances and voting more interesting. Finally some of my favorite character interactions were with him and Lindsay and Izzy; such as when how Lindsay said wants to earn his trust, or how Izzy’s craziness controlled the conversation to focus on dancing.