His soul power increased after being treated? Ning Rongrong was addicted
Wang Hai, a healing-type soul master, would trigger special effects when using healing soul skills on patients, including but not limited to increasing the opponent's soul power level, body strength, soul ring age, and even evolving the opponent's martial soul!
After the special effect was triggered, Wang Hai would enjoy ten times the reward!
Thus, several years later, Wang Hai's "Master" name resounded throughout the Spirit Master world, and he opened the "Security Hall". Countless Spirit Masters came to seek treatment, just to enjoy the powerful effects.
No one dared to cause trouble because the first person who dared to cause trouble was called Tang Hao. The grass on his grave was already ten meters tall.
Those who had been treated by Wang Hai were all top experts on the continent.
After Liu Erlong was healed, her spirit evolved into Thunder Flame Dragon, her killing intent dispelled, the knot in her heart untied, and she personally killed the coward Yu Xiao Gang, becoming the first guardian of the Security Hall.
Ning Rongrong, the first to take Wang Hai as her master, under her addiction to healing, had long ago strengthened her Nine Treasure Glazed Tile Pagoda to the point where it was indestructible, even killing a god.
However, there were always people who couldn't figure it out.
On this day, Tang San came to visit.
"Your soul power is thick and pure, your body is strong, and your spiritual power far surpasses your peers. There's nothing wrong with you. You don't need treatment." Wang Hai casually diagnosed.
"I'm here to avenge my father!" Tang San said hatefully.
"Revenge? Tsk tsk, Rongrong, someone's looking for trouble, you deal with it." Wang Hai was too lazy to act, ordering Ning Rongrong around.
"Senior Sister, don't! Let me do it!" As soon as he finished speaking, a long leg kicked out, and Tang San flew backwards, his bones and tendons completely shattered.
Xiao Wu retracted her leg and looked at Wang Hai with dissatisfaction: This kind of little trash, what need is there to call Rongrong Shijie?"
Level 4 is enough.
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Ill give you my honest review so that you can improve quite a bit. WRITING QUALITY: 3 stars - It's because there a lot of grammatical errors in your story. There are some sentence fragments that doesn't complement the whole idea of your sentence, like 'Hartley woke up, he laid in bed looking at the ceiling, his muscles were sore.' in your chapter one, i will try to edit this part so that the sentences will complement on how Hartley woke up, 'Hartley woke up on the bed with his muscles sore.' just keep it plain and short when describing on how Hartley woke up. I want to remind you, chapter one gives off the first impression, you need to make your first chapter interesting and has the ability to bring in more readers. I find your first chapter not that interesting, I think, it is because on how you build the structure of your world... if you want people to imagine what you are imagining while writing, add more details with the world background.