alissa salls

Alissa is going to be the heroine for sure!

great novel and i recomand it if u have the time, but my question is how the things between him and Alissa progressed? are they together now or they become enemies? pls respond, i need to know and if everything good and they remained just friends, is there anyone in his life, i started this because of the romance tag there so I need to know

man just please come back its been so long waiting for the story .We are missing the story the dynamics and the obviously asher and alissa's story please author don't abandon this story it was so good ,we waited everyday for the new chapter to get released ,the cliffhangers , the adventurous actions and the power up everything . PLEASE JUST DON'T ABANDON THE STORY . I personally waited everyday for new chapters read the previous chapter or the story 5-6 times i also don't remember because the story was so good . SO, PLEASE COMEBACK AND RESUME THE MASTERPIECE OF A STORY YOU CREATED. THANK YOU

Hello everyone, and to the writer, this is a review from a Brazilian reader and fan of Ice and Fire, and all the books... The work is very good, it's realistic; those who aren't enjoying it or gave up did so because they are incapable of reading something decent, because this work is decent. It's not great, or brilliant, but it resembles the original content; at times the writing reminds me of GRRM. Being direct, it's clear that the author created a realistic protagonist. Who said Valyrians can't have accidents, or that they are all strong and brave? That's the reader's imagination, Martin never said that. Therefore, a character who will not be the king to sit on the throne, who will not be the hero, is plausible, especially since A Song of Ice and Fire is full of interesting secondary characters, such as: Petyr Baelish, Tywin Lannister, Jorah Mormont, among others. I ask the author to continue, the work is good, but I ask you to pay attention to the fact that you repeat many scenes from different points of view, like the marriage of Aegon and Alissa. And I ask you to remember the north...

I have read almost 1000+ novels, just saying cuz people dont assume me as novice and new reader. At first i was quiet happy after finding this novel and reading the intro summary, as i have already read the chinese snow apocalypse one and i really liked that, so i was ready to dive into this novel with almost 150% positive bias. But damn, it was such a let down, so much let down truly. I will explain in points about what i liked and what not, for easy understanding. what i liked 1.starting introduction scenes and character interaction with alissa. 2. slight realistic vibe and in depth character & world building. what i hated 1. do you know why mc parents are rarely mentioned or the author just portray mc as orphan at the start in almost every novel, cuz the readers can just skip that aspect and focus on the rest story, but here the mc parents die cuz they dont believe when his son told that their flight will crash and dont board it. i am so astonished like really, so damn stupid, it just takes 4-5 hours from manila to incheon on flight, mc could have went their and made them come , but no no no no the mc is busy playing with his sister and waiting till the day his parents die on the expected day of the crash, and guess what mc doing on the crash day -> looking on his stupid radar and seeing his parents die and he is like sry i tried :)) . i have read almost every novel and in any of which there is regression and their is something like the fated day of family member death, not a single one had this stupid outcome, in each of them they mc saved his family. except here such stupid novel ,why regress if u are a sh1t through and through and even after having superpowers, just remain dead mc ,u not worth regressing, better give this chance to someone else. 2. mc regressed 30 days back apocalypse, but waited till almost last day to tell this to his love interest the female dr. , whats the point of this ? why not tell early ? does alisaa dont have any parents or family members? she not have anyone she want to save? (the whole novel is based on the premise of realisitic vibe , so do it properly, author just chooses what he likes and put some realistic element and forget the rest) 3.whats the deal with sister, it feels like love interest, idk if anyone likes this sh1t ,but i do not. 4.mc family name is del rosario, author mentions many time like "i am del rosario i am strong, i am del rosario i can do it, del rosario can do anything" author trying so hard to portray del rosario as something , but in reality my thought about this -> just shut up weak sh1t , u are the first mc who regressed and cant do a sh1t and keeps crying every chapter and just thinking about lust all day. who cares about del rosario.( advice - first make mc do something that make readers feel like wow!! ,than write this type of things) 5.after telling dr alissa about the apocalypse and the propsal, mc becomes like a obsessive lust animal ,pouncing on her ( note - at this time his parents are on the road to meet god and he has many necessary things to do before the apocalypse day) i can write maybe 10 more -ve points , even when i read at most the starting part, some might say the novel will get better later, but so what my perception about this weak lustfull stupid sh1t mc is already made. I know the author is new and its not right for me to be this critique but i am damn sry truly cuz i rarel make review and damn this one did made me right one, pure ragebait .