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my cat always beside me if Iam read this story

fast update great story hope continue with better variation of story beside the original canon.to made harem kinda hard with ******* around but keep it minimum ,I hate too many harem.cause the MC will neglected them beside making sex

The updating stability isnt the worst beacuse there is a new chapter everyday beside hollidays, The world backround isnt the worst but i dont know to much beside the forest and the shops, Writing quality once and awhile i find some lazy writing but beside that its fine, Story development the potionoligy is a good idea for development and the town quest was fun to read, Character design i like the cool dot the grows in his eyes from somthing and the cool white hair but beside that a normal character.

Beside the usual translation errors like names mixed up, the story is ok

question. does his system do anything beside mental protection and newbie bundle.beside telling him time system is nowhere to see.