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This is a better premise for base system story. However grammarb is terrible words not making sense at times. Gender of characters sometimes incorrect. The unit of measurements way to exaggerated. Example given away 5 tons of water per person. For people to be poor no way they could transport that much water let alone store it. I would go back and proofread thoroughly.

The writing is incomprehensible. It has a female protagonist with Space that can fit a huge base filled with a hundred thousand people. It has a water source and large swathes of arable land. But I just can't go on reading this novel because of the grammar and writing style.

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i recommended to base zhongli or morax in the lore not in the game because he got nerfed because he is a playable character which made him weak so its better to based morax to the lore not in the game because in the lore morax is the one who created the terrain and mountains so morax would probably be a planetary level because teyvat has more land than the water and we can all see that in the map unlike in one piece who has more water than land teyvat has more land than water so morax would be a planetary level in the lore

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