wisdom king raphael

i just wanted to read something similar to camelots rise and reading this after that made it so paifull to read.raphael is more like 3rd rate system than the wisdom king,and there is too many forsed plot.every character acts like idiots.i guess the saying the charector is as smart as the author is true😤😒😕

First of all, let me start with the story is great, but it still has flaws. The story is okay, but I think it's not worth reading with your brain active. Because MC is a bit misogynistic, he has a saviour complex, that he should fix these women because they're not acting how he thinks women should act, soft and fragile. He can't fathom the thought of women being tougher than him. For a god of Wisdom, he lacks some of it, if not the majority. MC also can't think for himself because he has the Raphael system from Tensura, who does the thinking and all the work for him. I give points for actually making Raphael somewhat functional, on how she is in Tensura, but she does all the work for MC. Not even in Tensura does she do that, in Tensura Raphael only does what Rimuru tell her to and helps Rimuru control his skill while occasionally giving advice. Mind you, Raphael is already in her second evolution; she didn't start as a system, that is what I think the author fumbles. Overall, it's okay, not amazing but not trash. Just wish the MC actually did something without the help of Raphael and actually showed why he is named God of Wisdom. Because he ain't got no wisdom

[Plot-line] [The Void: A twelve–year–old Shirō wakes up in a void with knowledge slowly engraving itself into his soul.] [First Steps: An innumerable amount of time has past since Shirō has awakened within the void and he has gained a greater understanding of existence.] [Origin: Shirō begins to understand more about his soul and what his origin is.] [Skills: Shirō learns to crystallize his wisdom into {Skills}. Shirō creates {Sage} to boost his thoughts, and {Archivist} to sort information.] [Magic: Shirō realizes his Soul is drawing in Void energy passively, and begins to experiment with it resulting in {Magic Eater} and {Magic Core}.] [A Craftsmen’s Tools: Shirō delves into his growing knowledge concerning creation with the use of {Sage} and {Archivist} with the outcome being {Creation} to help streamline the process of making {Skills}, and {Destruction} to remove redundancies and possible imperfections.] [Understanding: Shirō begins to understand the limits of his {Skills}. Shirō uses {Creation} and {Sage} to break his {Skills} limits. Some time has passed and Shirō begins to understand the concept of evolution from his growing wisdom. Shirō uses {Magic Eater} with {Creation} to make {Evolution} to make his {Skills} evolve.] [Great Sage: Shirō uses {Evolution} on {Sage} resulting in {Great Sage}. {Great Sage} Suggest integrating {Skills} into one another to improve performance, Shirō agrees. {Great Sage} integrates {Archivist} into it’s self to improve processing and memory capacity, and uses {Creation} to make {Deviant} to increase {Skill} efficiency.] [Emotions: Shirō begins to refer to {Great Sage} with female pronouns. {Great Sage} begins to study her masters ever growing knowledge with {Archivist}. {Great Sage} uses {Evolution} to grant itself the ability to experience emotions to better assist her master. {Great Sage} Uses {Evolution}, {Creation} and {Destruction} on {Magic Eater} resulting in {Void Eater}.] [Rapheal: {Great Sage} uses {Void Eater} to provide energy to {Evolution}. {Great Sage} request permission to use {Evolution} on itself, Shirō approves. {Great Sage} uses {Evolution} on itself, resulting in {Wisdom King: Raphael}.] [Akashic Records: {Wisdom King: Raphael} request permission to evolve the rest of Shirō’s {Skills}, Shirō allows it. {Void Eater} evolved into {Void God: Azatoroth}. {Magic Core} evolved into {Magicule Breeder Reactor}. {Archivist} evolved into {Information King: Akashic Records}.] [Athena: {Wisdom King: Raphael} pause’s {Skill} evolution to inform Shirō of {Information King: Akashic Records}. Shirō suggest to integrate {Information King: Akashic Records} into {Wisdom King: Raphael} to enhance performance. {Wisdom King: Raphael} uses {Deviant} on {Information King: Akashic Records} to fuse it into itself, but with no results. {Wisdom King: Raphael} attempt again using {Evolution} and {Deviant} on both {Magicule Breeder Reactor} and {Information King: Akashic Records} resulting in {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena}.] [Naming: {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena} informs her master of her successful evolution. Shirō is surprised by the amount of emotion in his long time companions voice. {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena} informs him that it was the result of both the evolution and his desire for companionship causing her to gain a stronger sense of self. Shirō ask her if he should simply refer to her as Athena now, but is instead requested to provide her with a name to improve her abilities. Shirō ask how a name would improve her abilities, with {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena} then explaining the power of names. Shirō now understanding the significant of names, begins to go through the knowledge of legend’s that {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena} provided him, and decide to name her {Medusa}. After being named {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena} evolved past a {Skill} and became {Codex: Medusa}. {Medusa} greets her master and swears her eternal love and loyalty to him.] [Evolution: Having been a innumerable amount of time since {Medusa’s} naming, Shirō has begun to question if he can leave this void, to which {Medusa} says that’s the only way to leave would be to evolve himself. Shirō ask how, to which {Medusa} states that he would have to evolve and assimilate all of his {Skills} into one.] [Next Step: Shirō request {Medusa} to begin, {Medusa} complies. {Evolution} evolves into {King of Evolution: Darwin}. {Creation} evolves into {Creation God: Brahma}. {Destruction} evolves into {Destruction God: Shiva}. {Medusa} having finished her task, began the final steps to her masters freedom.] [Voice of The World: {Medusa} begins fusing all of Shirō’s {Skills} resulting in the creation of the {Voice of The World}. Shirō begins his evolution. The evolution cause’s the void to start to condense around him.] [Big–Bang: Shirō is beginning to reach the final stage of his evolution. Shirō evolves into the {Voice of The World} resulting in the void to implode onto itself. The resulting explosion resulted with the creation of the multiverse.] [New Role: Shirō gets used to the idea of being God. {Medusa} gives him a pep talk. Shirō start’s to study the {Akashic Records} to create a planet.] [Cardinal World: Shirō uses {Voice of The World} to create his first solar system. Shirō creates the Cardinal World as his base of operations.] [Earth: Shirō has {Medusa} find a version of Earth similar to his old one. {Medusa} finds one but is concerned about the traits this Earth has. {Medusa} informs Shirō that she found one. Shirō goes to Earth(DxD).] [Kyoto: Shirō appears outside of Kyoto, Japan. He has {Medusa} create a identity for him to use. Shirō meets kunou who is distressed about her mother’s disappearance.] [Yasaka: Shirō saves Yasaka from the hero faction. Yasaka ask if he is a God? Shirō explains that he can be considered one, but is much more then a God.] [Time Goes On: Shirō has lived in Kyoto for over a years. Shirō and Yasaka have been growing closer as time goes on. {Medusa} is worried that Yasaka is stealing her master.]

[Plot-line] [The Void: A twelve–year–old Shirō wakes up in a void with knowledge slowly engraving itself into his soul.] [First Steps: An innumerable amount of time has past since Shirō has awakened within the void and he has gained a greater understanding of existence.] [Origin: Shirō begins to understand more about his soul and what his origin is.] [Skills: Shirō learns to crystallize his wisdom into {Skills}. Shirō creates {Sage} to boost his thoughts, and {Archivist} to sort information.] [Magic: Shirō realizes his Soul is drawing in Void energy passively, and begins to experiment with it resulting in {Magic Eater} and {Magic Core}.] [A Craftsmen’s Tools: Shirō delves into his growing knowledge concerning creation with the use of {Sage} and {Archivist} with the outcome being {Creation} to help streamline the process of making {Skills}, and {Destruction} to remove redundancies and possible imperfections.] [Understanding: Shirō begins to understand the limits of his {Skills}. Shirō uses {Creation} and {Sage} to break his {Skills} limits. Some time has passed and Shirō begins to understand the concept of evolution from his growing wisdom. Shirō uses {Magic Eater} with {Creation} to make {Evolution} to make his {Skills} evolve.] [Great Sage: Shirō uses {Evolution} on {Sage} resulting in {Great Sage}. {Great Sage} Suggest integrating {Skills} into one another to improve performance, Shirō agrees. {Great Sage} integrates {Archivist} into it’s self to improve processing and memory capacity, and uses {Creation} to make {Deviant} to increase {Skill} efficiency.] [Emotions: Shirō begins to refer to {Great Sage} with female pronouns. {Great Sage} begins to study her masters ever growing knowledge with {Archivist}. {Great Sage} uses {Evolution} to grant itself the ability to experience emotions to better assist her master. {Great Sage} Uses {Evolution}, {Creation} and {Destruction} on {Magic Eater} resulting in {Void Eater}.] [Rapheal: {Great Sage} uses {Void Eater} to provide energy to {Evolution}. {Great Sage} request permission to use {Evolution} on itself, Shirō approves. {Great Sage} uses {Evolution} on itself, resulting in {Wisdom King: Raphael}.] [Akashic Records: {Wisdom King: Raphael} request permission to evolve the rest of Shirō’s {Skills}, Shirō allows it. {Void Eater} evolved into {Void God: Azatoroth}. {Magic Core} evolved into {Magicule Breeder Reactor}. {Archivist} evolved into {Information King: Akashic Records}.] [Athena: {Wisdom King: Raphael} pause’s {Skill} evolution to inform Shirō of {Information King: Akashic Records}. Shirō suggest to integrate {Information King: Akashic Records} into {Wisdom King: Raphael} to enhance performance. {Wisdom King: Raphael} uses {Deviant} on {Information King: Akashic Records} to fuse it into itself, but with no results. {Wisdom King: Raphael} attempt again using {Evolution} and {Deviant} on both {Magicule Breeder Reactor} and {Information King: Akashic Records} resulting in {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena}.] [Naming: {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena} informs her master of her successful evolution. Shirō is surprised by the amount of emotion in his long time companions voice. {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena} informs him that it was the result of both the evolution and his desire for companionship causing her to gain a stronger sense of self. Shirō ask her if he should simply refer to her as Athena now, but is instead requested to provide her with a name to improve her abilities. Shirō ask how a name would improve her abilities, with {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena} then explaining the power of names. Shirō now understanding the significant of names, begins to go through the knowledge of legend’s that {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena} provided him, and decide to name her {Medusa}. After being named {Goddess of Wisdom: Athena} evolved past a {Skill} and became {Codex: Medusa}. {Medusa} greets her master and swears her eternal love and loyalty to him.] [Evolution: Having been a innumerable amount of time since {Medusa’s} naming, Shirō has begun to question if he can leave this void, to which {Medusa} says that’s the only way to leave would be to evolve himself. Shirō ask how, to which {Medusa} states that he would have to evolve and assimilate all of his {Skills} into one.] [Next Step: Shirō request {Medusa} to begin, {Medusa} complies. {Evolution} evolves into {King of Evolution: Darwin}. {Creation} evolves into {Creation God: Brahma}. {Destruction} evolves into {Destruction God: Shiva}. {Medusa} having finished her task, began the final steps to her masters freedom.] [Voice of The World: {Medusa} begins fusing all of Shirō’s {Skills} resulting in the creation of the {Voice of The World}. Shirō begins his evolution. The evolution cause’s the void to start to condense around him.] [Big–Bang: Shirō is beginning to reach the final stage of his evolution. Shirō evolves into the {Voice of The World} resulting in the void to implode onto itself. The resulting explosion resulted with the creation of the multiverse.] [New Role: Shirō gets used to the idea of being God. {Medusa} gives him a pep talk. Shirō start’s to study the {Akashic Records} to create a planet.] [Cardinal World: Shirō uses {Voice of The World} to create his first solar system. Shirō creates the Cardinal World as his base of operations.] [Earth: Shirō has {Medusa} find a version of Earth similar to his old one. {Medusa} finds one but is concerned about the traits this Earth has. {Medusa} informs Shirō that she found one. Shirō goes to Earth(DxD).] [Kyoto: Shirō appears outside of Kyoto, Japan. He has {Medusa} create a identity for him to use. Shirō meets kunou who is distressed about her mother’s disappearance.] [Yasaka: Shirō saves Yasaka from the hero faction. Yasaka ask if he is a God? Shirō explains that he can be considered one, but is much more then a God.] [Time Goes On: Shirō has lived in Kyoto for over a years. Shirō and Yasaka have been growing closer as time goes on. {Medusa} is worried that Yasaka is stealing her master.]

[IDEAS FOR RAPHAEL] [IDEA ONE] {World}: Fate/Stay Night: Heavens Feel {Plot}: One day while observing different universe’s Raphael came across a unique timeline in the Nasuverse, one where kiritsugu died in the fire before he saved Shirou with Avalon. Now usually the most he might do is heal the kid up, and maybe give him a little something to help him out. But this Shirou was very different from the others. So different in fact that he could possibly use all at least all five known true magic’s of his world if properly nurtured, something Raphael intends to do by adopting the boy. {Status}: Name: Ahura Murumasa Shirō Species: True God Age: ? Crest: Wisdoms Crest Primary Divinities: Blacksmithing, Swords, Good, Evil, Destruction Lesser Divinities: Heroes, Treasure, Space, Time, Wisdom, Soul, Creation Origin Skills: [God of Destruction: Shiva] Primordial Skills: [Forge God Core: Shirō]|[Pandoras Box] Ultimate Skills: [King of Heroes: Gilgamesh]|[King of Knights: Arthur Pendragon]|[Second Magic: Kaleidoscope]|[Third Magic: Heavens Feel]|[Fourth Magic: Gods Library]|[Fifth Magic: Magic Blue]|ect……… Name: Sakura Species: Divine Demoness Age: ? Crest: Wisdom Crest Origin Skills: (None) Primordial Skills: (None) Ultimate Skills: [Goddess of True Love: Parvati]|[All The Worlds Evil Angra Mainyu]|[God of Endless Love: Kama]|ect………