review for holes

cool premise and story but the main character is a little dumb and there are plot holes. review review review review review review review review review

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this is basically a copy and past with some minor edits that leave plot holes. maybe in the future it will change and/or go into a different direction, and maybe the plot holes will be be fixed. if it does start to get better it would be in later chapters, until then i would wait till it has 10 - 20 chapters to review it again and hope it is fixed by then

apologies for my last trashy review updating it there are many loop holes in the story but the CHEAT is OP so i am no longer complaining the comedy is 'ok'