ved vyas

First read the original book there many things is not correct in tv shows like Karna was not taught by Dronacharya and many others so first read the book and do not pass judgement . Some say Mahabharata was written by victor but this is not correct it was written by Ved Vyas . He was the one from which Pandavas and Kaurava emerged so no matter who won hi Great grandchildren died in the war . The he with the help of lord Ganesha the book was written . So kindly i advise you to read the book it's entertaining like awesome novels.

I love the chemistry between Ved and rick

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Dette er en interessant fantasyhistorie med en fantastisk idé. Adrien er en unik hovedperson, fordi han bruger logik og videnskab til at forstå magi. Hans rejse ind i en ny verden er spændende, og hans venskab med Victor gør historien mere underholdende. Historien kan forbedres ved at gøre noget af dialogen mere naturlig og reducere gentagne beskrivelser. Alt i alt er det en stærk og lovende start. Bliv ved med at skrive, bliv ved med at forbedre dig, og tro på din historie. Du har et stort potentiale som forfatter!