st mungo s
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Synopsis
Losing his parent early on, he had to survive in a world he couldn't even see...
Blind and left alone, he was seen as a parasite by the social hierarchy of the new ages filled with martial arts and soulbonds
Forced to mature early his train of thought was different from his peers as he didn´t mind derogatory reviews about him.
The day he awoke his soul was the day he cried in desperation while God played tricks with him as his soul-awakening was a blessing in disguise.
Nobody would have ever imagined that he was neither blind nor a parasite until the final moment, he opened his golden eyes that flickered brightly, eagerly waiting to devour everyone daring to obstruct his path towards the summit.
Follow Jason on his adventurous journey throughout the vast universe filled with miraculous sceneries and mysterious beings.
Some readers might not like information, but I do!
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Table of Contents
Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :The Beginning
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The idea is neat but the development of the story makes no sense. Details to streamline the different scenes into a whole chapter are missing which makes the writing seem poorly planned. In chapter 1, the only well-thought out part is the reasoning behind the MC's appearance. I understand wanting to introduce the MC to other important characters but, story-wise it makes no sense. For example, why would the Head of the DMLE be interogating the MC who at that time is 1. ignorant of the existance of Magic & 2. an child ? After the MC is send to St. Mungo's - still ignorant of Magic in the eyes of the npc's and receives his Hogwart's Letter whereafter he meets Albus Dumbledore, I stopped reading. I recommand the author to rewrite some parts, so it at least makes some sense...