After successfully reincarnating into the cultivation world, I won lying down
The new books,"I'm Wild After Dressing As A Big Boss 'Contracted Beast" and "After Rebirth, I've Became A Foppish Young Master's Favorite Pet"
After White Dream's death, she had finally been reincarnated successfully. However, in order to be able to be successfully reincarnated, she had really worried her heart out. Not only was she afraid that she would accidentally miscarry, but she was also worried that her heartless father would forcefully miscarry her. Bai Meng shrugged helplessly."It's really too difficult for me."
Only after successfully being born did he realize that he seemed to have been thrown into the cultivation world? But she didn't want to cultivate.
She just wanted to be a salted fish and live a life of being fed by her parents, master, and senior brother every day!
Master: Even if my disciple is a good-for-nothing, I will protect her for life!
Senior Brother: Eh, Junior Sister is trash? Are you serious?
At this moment, White Dream was being "grounded" by someone with a look of despair on her face. She even said harshly,"You're not allowed to come out until you break through!"
Bai Meng looked at the person who had "confined" her and her face twitched.
Don't think that I don't recognize you just because you're wearing a mask!
A certain someone's eyes flashed with ridicule as he said,"Is there anything faster than dual cultivation?"
Bai Meng held her sore waist and glared at him angrily!
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The dialogue has a decent flow and the use of hyphens instead of quotations marks was an interesting way to read, the first I've seen. World-building and character design can use some work, I couldn't visualize any settings nor conversations being had in the first few lines which are crucial to captivating a reader. Despite the needed touching-up, it's a decent read.