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The Laurel Springs Emergency Response Team Series

Fall in love with these hot first responders featuring friends to lovers, second chances, and suspense at every turn. 18+, sex scenes The Laurel Springs Emergency Response Team is created by Laramie Briscoe, an eGlobal Creative Publishing Signed Author.

Laramie Briscoe · Urban

The Reader Who Stole My Heart

Alina never dreamed that her words would change anyone's life. She is sweet and soft until someone crosses her limits. Writing is her escape, her dream, but in a world where talent is ignored and voice has been silenced, she feels invisible. Kai Arden, the nation's most celebrated actor, has everything: fame, fortune, millions of fans. But behind the shiny lights, he's hollow, chasing a story that can ignite something real in him. A story that can heal the emptiness. When their paths cross, it isn't romance.. It's with sharp words, misunderstanding, and walls of pride. She hated him even before she saw his face. He challenges her in a way no one ever dared, and yet, slowly, against reason, love begins to grow where anger once lived. This isn't just a love story. It's about chasing dreams when the world tells you not to. It's about finding comfort in someone who sees the broken pieces... and fitting them together. Because sometimes, the right person doesn't just love you, they heal you

Sophia_Rachel19 · Urban

Omniscient Reader [Complete]

Kim Dokja does not consider himself the protagonist of his own life. Befitting the name his parents gave him, he is a solitary person whose sole hobby is reading web novels. For over a decade, he has lived vicariously through Yu Junghyeok, the main character of the web novel Three Ways to Survive the Apocalypse (TWSA). Through Junghyeok, Dokja has experienced secondhand the trials of repeatedly regressing in time, in search of an end to life-threatening “scenarios” that force people to act out narratives for the amusement of god-like “Constellations.” After reading 3,149 chapters—long after all other readers lost interest—Dokja finally resigns himself to the story ending. However, he receives an enigmatic message from the author, stating that the story will soon be monetized, before his surroundings suddenly go dark. He swiftly realizes that fiction has become reality and he is now living through TWSA. Although he is the singular omniscient reader of the events yet to come, his success in the scenarios is not guaranteed—but perhaps his advantage will empower him to step into the protagonist role that never suited him before.

Passingbreeze · Fantasy

Dual Cultivation: Omnipotent Villain with Reader System!

[Be warned fellow Daoist, you are in an unsafe zone, where boneage below the 18, shall not head on. If your Dao Heart is weak, turn around and leave. ] *** Wang Tianmo gets reincarnated into the body of a trash, simp, beta villain—who would hand over all his resources to the heroine, only for her to choose the chosen son of density and leave him, causing his inner demon to take over. However, the Current Tianmo, now equipped with a mysterious system that has gained ego after READING stories i.e became a profound reader, and multiple blessings, is now on the hunt for protagonists. What's more, he literally has infinite wealth and unlimited resources provided by the system. However, what do you mean by heaven isn't a passive player but an active player?! Heaven actively plays the role of strengthening the protagonist and protects them!?... Damn, plot armor can't be that necessary, can it?! Saving those chosen ones no matter what?! What kind of concept is this?! Just because someone changed their destiny, heaven sent a backup?! Holy shit. ** Note: Killing protagonists will be a little hard. Mc is Evil as he will actively hunt all peerless treasure and in the process, he will wipe out clans, families, bloodlines, sects, etc. This isn't outright omnipotent Mc... Mc has a special ability which allows him to steal the abilities of the protagonist after beating them senseless or killing them, so, after a long run, he will have multiple cheats and systems function—100X rebate, Auto-cultivation, world hopping, clan building benefits, family building benefits, etc. ( basically all the combined cheats ) It is a strong to very strong realm quickly based on age setting but not the world setting. Don't be disappointed by an early loss, because, how can a new cultivator fight against nascent souls realm cultivators that have lived for 3000 years? .. In short, Mc gets all the cheats and systems as you can imagine by beating the protagonists but beating them is hard. Special note: Highly Evil Mc. ( not justifying any killing. Mc actively has an "Innate talent farm" where he breeds hundreds of women just so, they could produce children with peerless innate gifts that Mc would steal. Yes. Mc will kill his own children for innate treasures like Supreme Bones, bloodlines, Innate Intents, etc ) this is done by exploiting the "family blessing system" of typical xiuxian, xianxia novels where Mc's child have a high chance of producing talented offspring. But that doesn't mean Mc won't have kids. Just read to find out. .. This is also a slow-paced novel but I can guarantee profound smut. The majesty of Dual cultivation shall shake the nine heavens and even corrupt the powerful saint, with a mere chant. Here are tags: Major:Eastern ( mostly Asian concept), Xiulian Minor: Xiuxian, Xianxia, Xuanhuan, Slow pace, Dual cultivation, Clan building, sect building, family building, complex family relationship-mc kills his own beother, Smart characters, Manipulative characters, decent female leads, smart female leads, Green-tea female leads, NETORI, smart side characters, Talented MC, multiple cheats, protagonist-hunting, Multiple worlds, magic, cultivation, world traveling, best taming, female lead taming, Cold Mc, Manipulative Mc, Villainious Mc, Evil Mc, No-love at first sight, slow burn feelings, Highly Cultured Dual Cultivation, early pregnancy (I mean why not?). No Yuri, No Netorare. Fully Cultural. Peak. GOATed. Unfiltered. Discord: https://discord.gg/ET9PCUKsUq ( Highly uncensored images on Discord. ) Published since: 13 Feb, 2026

A_Dragon_Fantasy · Eastern

The Reader and Protagonist Definitely Have to Be in True Love.

An internet troll who wanted attention, the reader criticized his favorite web novel, saying: “The protagonist is dumb and the author is s*upid.” Author: “…Got it.” Unfortunately for him, the author actually listened to his (troll) feedback. The formerly lighthearted tale of a cute harem master suddenly became super dark and edgy. The reader could only helplessly look on as the protagonist was ab*sed and betrayed, finally embarking on the road to becoming completely evil. Everything was a mess! After that the reader transmigrated into a strange world. How come the person in front of him looks like the protagonist (evil undead version)? Just what is going on?! ----------------------------- This is an action-filled BL love story. The main POV character is an ordinary person who got transported into the world of the novel he was reading. There he encounters the protagonist of the book and their romance starts when he says “Meow.”

Slurpeeeee · Fantasy

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