young gellert grindelwald

this is pretty good , other than different way of English due to Ai translation . Q- is Gellert Grindelwald related to Gojo clan as the Jhonny depp version has white hair and blue eyes?

Isso não e um Grindelwald nunca, isso e protagonista coxo e fraco, jamais será um Grindelwald, podia ter feito um nascido trouxa que seria melhor, e Gellert jamais se arrependeria do que fez já que a primeira a 2 guerra mundial foi uma prova de que ele estava certo sobre os trouxas

The way how the MC composes himself around as well the description of what he wears and his charisma like Gellert Grindelwald along with the kind of Wand and what it's made of is quite interesting more so intriguing when u add the black Phoenix definitely cant wait to read more look forward for when ur able to get the chance

I just hope dumbles don't kill gellert. Mason should kill grindlewald himself like the original story. I just hope dumbles don't kill gellert. Mason should kill grindlewald himself like the original story.

The author either needs to hire someone to proofread. So there is less insistencies between chapters. So he doesn't forget what he wrote, because there's too many consistencies, like she found the cure to werewolves, and then completely forgot about it. She upgraded the elder wander herself and has the capabilities of making wands, yet? She never used that capability to do.You have her uncle gellert grindelwald a new wand the author needs to get a proofreader or someone who reads it before it fully gets published.Because there's two consistencies