collective psyche

This is a pain to read, the collective iq of the characters is lower than room temperature.

the mc Die what's left now just kyubei collective consciousness

We absolutely STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN LU TINGXIO he is cool and collective. But LU JINGLI is HILARIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIOOOUS

This is a pretty good story. The TL addresses the use of PK when the intent is PvP. But the TL has huge issues with collective nouns. e.g. Loot is a collective noun, while "loots" is a verb, but TL keeps using "loots" in place of "loot." This happens with dozens of other collective nouns. But TL does a good job of the cultural annotations/footnotes as well. The story can get stale, so i really like the aspects that take place "in the real world" even if they get a bit ridiculous and can break suspension of disbelief.

this is just the start , but the way it potrays the psyche of character is insane ...one of the best starts to a novel