ironic sentences examples

The english is terrible. The Author forgets letters and cant make complete sentences. The Mc’s laugh is like “MUHAHAHAHA.” Author needs to at least learn how to make sentences flow together and make proper sentences. The more complex grammatical errors can be over looked (Examples: “random sentence” / Therefore, I wish you good luck / Dog’s) blah blah blah you get it.

Interesting concept! I really like how the symbols added in each sentences and chapters brings vibrant imagery to the ironic fate that each character portrays (the cursed baby and the prince part is amazing). But I do think that some sentences needs editting, just like what I had mentioned from the comments. You also need to avoid using Ellipsis too often. Plus, you also need to capitalise every first letter when starting with a sentence. Kudos for the author!

This book is Okay. The writer struggles with POVs, which is very necessary for this book, and a few basic writing things that make it duller than it should be. examples of this is misspelled words, not a whole lot of descriptive sentences or paragraphs and the dialogue could be better if they spent more time on it. Other than these, it's good.

Kingdom building in fanfiction should not exist... 90% of the story could be deleted and not change anything! a huge TL:DR would be Jon is powerful, Jon unites everything and rules. But over 90% of the story is kingdom building with examples and long sentences of his policies and how he plans to rule and conquer... as if it is needed at all!

I kind of like this story, but the author has serious issues with negation. Take these sentences for example "After a while, "Don't worry, you are the only person that is worthy of having me. You are nothing compared to others." said Jayna.". Most chapters has several such examples where the author writes the opposite of what author probably means.