cast of atonement

interesting, especially the atonement of endeavor. the story is engaging. author also potrayed both natsu and gray pretty damn well. it's just unfortunate that the update is once a week.

I loved this story until the FML started to treat the ML Osric as a whipping boy. She became arrogant and vicious and I stopped reading it. I thought this would be a story about mistakes, learning and growing through the mistakes and atonement not the FML becoming heartless and viscous. Both Osric and her Father made unforgivable mistakes. Both needed atonement. I don’t like how the characters started changing. Lavinia and Osric should have stood united and defeated all obstacles. He was worthy. She became not

"Ten Million Year Later" atonement is not an option you will never be able to forget your sins you will never be able to escape us my good sir I shall make sure you suffer eternal punishment

so good so so good... I'm too poor for this though ahh... tbh it's a bit annoying how she's paying for the original host's sins but if iIget over that then I really enjoy it, her atonement and her relationships aah... iIcame here for the rebirth and stayed for Daddy Wei

I feel bad for my previous review as author-sama is pretty chill and is new. My review was harsh. He deserves better than a subpar review. I'll read his story and offer advice as atonement for me actions. I'll do it as nicely as possible though. <3 Good luck in your endeavors.